Everyone has to grow up sometime, but when it's Twilight's best friends turn, will she have the strength to let him go?
Pic credit to whoever does the 'Ask Twilight Sparkle anything' thing on tumblr.
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chief maximus
Why do I write? Because I can't draw! I write mainly as an outlet, and don't take it too seriously. If you like what I write, awesome! If not, that's cool too.
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Quite good, and with a happy ending too!
But you have some mistakes such as: The dried grass that ponies eat is spelled 'hay'. 'Hey' is what you say to people instead of 'hello' or 'hi'.
Also, when you talk about something that belongs to someone you say: "That's Twilight's book not Rarity's.". Use the little [ ' ] line thing. I don't actually know what it's called...
At first I was like
Then I was like
But then I got better.
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Darn, I was sure I had fixed all the 'hey' 'hay' mistakes! Also this ['] is an apostrophe. I'm glad you liked it!
Another amazing story based off of a comic. Have you sent this into EqD?
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No...I wasn't really certain it was good enough, but I suppose there's no harm in trying. Also I'm glad you enjoyed it!
two types of mlp fics that makes me sad or yeary eyed ones where a animal or one of the main cast die and ones involeing spike hes like my faviote non pony good job :)
Definitely send it to EqD! It was super sweet!
Insert "Best Cry Ever" video here.
this...story...was....
I am going to cry....MAKE A SEQUEL!!! 
the comic always made me cry
but whenever i thought about it, i always told myself "why doesnt spike just live in a cave in the everfree forest? or in the mountain in dragonshy? somewhere close by but far enough that he wouldnt cause trouble" 
happy ending for me :[]
That was truly a touchin story as nothing but a mixture of sadness and happiness flow through me.
The bond between Spike and Twilight Sparkle is a strong one, and one not even the Princess of the Sun, can bare to comprehend.
NO words can truly express this great tale. As i do wish you the best of luck upon such future stories like this one.
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Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it! Thats one of the reasons I write! anyway, this is one of my earliest fics so I'm glad people still enjoy it. the ending may come off a little cheesy, but I tried to stay as believable as possible as far as actual show plausibility.
DAmn it, just Damn it, this is so sad, and so great at the same time, I don't know why I do this to my self and read these, but this is so good!
this is only one of 2 stories to make me cry so much, I don't even know what to say, But I know I can say thank you, Thank you for taking the time to give us this Fantastic story even no I am crying and smiling.
Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's, Clap's,
Thank you so much!! I am printing this out and putting it on my book case.
This story is just so... beautiful. Yes, beautiful. It's funny how our closest friends and loved ones usually defy the laws of physics themselves at certain times. How the impossible was made possible. I love these kinds of stories, it just makes me wanna
and in making a Pinkie Pie Swear, spike gained Pinkie's ability to defy physics(or is it biology in this case) and logic and was able to bring about a happy ending. though This is the last time i'm reading two sad stories in a row. first I read Decay, i barely cried. then after that i read this and started bawling from the get go. really like the way you penned a letter to that sounded almost like the cannon twilight .
63196 agreed, first I finished "Not my destiny" and was on the verge of crying, then I read this and started bawling
also your avatar is my desktop background
also can anyone tell me how to put the name of the person I am responding to instead of the comment number?
113262 uh nevermind
I had already read this story before but I thought I should read it again. I'm so glad I did!
You should write more, like about how Spike managed to remember and stuff.
Emergerd I love this!
I read a comic like this that made me start to cry, and I know I'm gonna cry with this one too
I've got to admit, manly tears were shed.
<- (THIS IS THE MANLIEST THING YOU'VE EVER SEEN)
Feels... Just... Feels.
Best. Story. EVER!
I cried probably a million times while reading this.
You should write a sequel on Spike during those years he was gone!
.....*trembles* ....
THIS GIVES ME THE FEELS. PLEASE MAKE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS. 
Just the word of Spike leaving Twilight alone makes me sad....
This gave me some hardcore feels. Awesome job with this.
through out this whole story i was like a brick wall.... but at the end when spike left, i was in bed crying.... THIS STORY DEFIED ALL LAWS OF MANLINESS..... and made a man cry.... BRAVO!!!!
BRAVO!!!!
I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH!!! MORE I NEED TO FEEL THIS WAY AGAIN!!!!! MORE!!!!!
Didn't cry, buy I felt. Cool story, bro.
While every adult must find independence, it was a **** move from Celestia to think that all dragoins eventually become monsters. Kinda wanted to see an epilogue of them beating Celestia for being an ignorant ****.
Great story.
Look, if stories like these even have the phrase "do this or Celestia will banish you", then Black Kyurem is gonna assume that you know about Tyrant Celestia one way or another. Granted, Black Kyurem does think that Celestia is the worst character in the series, every time "banishment" is involved, Black Kyurem tends to think "Tyrant Celestia" and another user who's like "Oh, she banished Luna so she's a tyrant". Correct Black Kyurem if he's wrong, but the whole "banishment" thing is getting far too old for Black Kyurem.
Great story
Dude, I cried.
Still overreacting to that whole banishment thing?
6155482 what?
Props to this story, it did something that is extremely difficult for any kind of movie, TV show, or story in general to do. It made me cry. I am normally a stone brick wall with steel beams when it comes to tearjerkers, but rarely any come close close to making me feel anything. And if those, maybe one or two made me cry. This made me cry. Props to you for making me cry like a baby at 3 AM.