Whilst I DID find it funny, mentally picturing everything they were doing to our long-suffering protagonist, it was sorta kinda hard to follow along what was going along, took several rereads to figure out just what was happening. So, yes. This chapter was pretty funny, it was just sorta hard to understand what exactly was going on because the flow was a little hard to follow.
Otherwise though, incredible detail and effort put into this chapter, without a doubt! That's one of your biggest strengths.
Whilst I DID find it funny, mentally picturing everything they were doing to our long-suffering protagonist, it was sorta kinda hard to follow along what was going along, took several rereads to figure out just what was happening. So, yes. This chapter was pretty funny, it was just sorta hard to understand what exactly was going on because the flow was a little hard to follow.
Otherwise though, incredible detail and effort put into this chapter, without a doubt! That's one of your biggest strengths.
4756788 Well I am not really that good with silly chapters but the next one is gonna be more straight forward.
No sane soldier would fucking follow a random being right into the middle of possibly hostile territory EVEN if the had a titan.
Ha.