A young pony by the name of Sun Storm has been playing guitar since he was a colt, he's good and now thinks it's time to start a band with some friends from school, eventually they meet a mare and that mare helps them make it big in the music industry, they become very popular due to their unique play style, eventually they become number one, leaving all of the other bands in the dust. Other bands either hate them or love them but one band goes beyond hating them, hating them to the point of drastic measures.
Chapters (11)
Good chapter. Keep it up.
Revise this a bit, bud. Otherwise great job.
4680356 It's been revised to my likings, I think I did a good job doing that.
4682894 Yolo Swiggity Swag BLAZE 4 DAYZ
Eat at my Taco van everyone. It's parked in your driveway now!
4721260 Lies.
4721266 Don't mind the bloody tires.
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[12:55 AM. Three cans of Mtn. Dews consumed] best chapter ever.
What the fuck?
Again, what the fuck?
You should put more detail into the important parts of a story, dude. Otherwise, good chapter.
Blaez 4 daez
4807203 Explain.
Mr. Buck was a white pony with a long black mane, his head was bald, he was also rather fat and wore a white tuxedo.
so does he have a "long black mane" or is he bald. But other then the confusion and some spelling errors, good story