This is an unofficial sequel to the ORIGINAL version of Overture
A READING OF THE ORIGINAL YOU CAN LISTEN TO HERE HERE.
written with permission from Exilo
Thunderlane awakes to find Octiava gone. He hurries out and tries to find her.
At the same time, Octavia sits at home, thinking about the previous night and wondering if she had made a mistake, leaving Thunderlane without saying anything.
Should she have stayed with Thunderlane until he woke? Should she have given him her address? Will she ever see him again? Will he come to her concert, or had she given up her one chance at love?
Featured 21/6/2014
Chapters (2)
In Overture, Octavia found Vinyl partying with Neon passed out on the couch, not crying her eyes out. Though if you are simply basing it off the original, I suppose that detail can be overlooked.
5169915 true. I'd have obviously added the ticket part from the newer version with a slight alteration, but I preferred the original version much better and based the fic specifically on that one, with the alternate ending, of course, since I preferred how it didn't make Vinyl seem like an oblivious ass
Next chapter in 2025 ?
Octavia
Octavia
I mean that's not the case here look at mr. And mrs. Cake two Earth ponies have two children that is a unicorn and a Pegasus
This is a pretty interesting start of a story here so Thunder Lane woken up and noticing that Octavia is not there and he felt pretty upset about this and all he found is her ticket knowing to the fact that he was going to be late for his training but in his heart he needs to find her so he was about to leave until donut Joe stop him and had a little chat with him but also given him a direction where Octavia lives and with that he left and he doesn't know how to get there so he decided to Run on foot not until one of the Rich unicorns tried to stop him and they try to smooth him with their daughter which apparently he does not like what he there doing so he tried to reason with them that he's not interested but they keep on nagging so he just decided enough is enough and just told them that he's not interest and he's already in love with somebody and with that he just ran off without any hesitation meanwhile Octavia was feeling a little guilty for leaving Thunder Lane without saying goodbye so she was just thinking that maybe she could have just said goodbye or at least something but then he showed up in front of her home not only she was surprised but also happy to see him so she explained why she left is because vinyl was getting worried about her so that's why she went home and they even talk about her past and everything but it looks like they're going on a date with each other again this is a pretty sweet story so far
She nodded. “Yes. I was hired to play at the reception. We barely made it there in time. The fact a Bugbear was attacking the town that day certainly did not help and… is something wrong, Thunderlane?”
He was giving her a shocked and confused look. “Wait. You two were the ones who tossed me into the air and rushed me through town to get to Cranky and Matilda’s wedding on that giant… whatever that machine was?”
Nice reference to the episode of Slice of Life I still like that episode
Wonderbolt
Particularly
Wow that was a very long time for an update of your story but nice to see if it's still going so it looks like thunder Lane and Octavia having lunch together and they're having a pretty nice conversation especially she even mentioned about the she lives in Ponyville with her sister vinyl and Thunder Lane was pretty surprised that during the wedding they never saw each other yet until now but until things kind of went South when those two Rich unicorns that Thunder Lane Saw this morning and they were not happy as well and they even insulted Octavia which he did not take it and they were about to get in a very heated argument and so the owner of the place put a stop to it and ask those two unicorns to leave before they make a scene and once they left the owner offer Thunder Lane and Octavia free lunch for that Outburst found the other ponies which that's pretty cool so they still continuing on on their lunch and tell Rainbow dash showed up telling him where is he bed and he was late and yeah he kind of forgot about that so he has to hurry up to get to the Wonderbolt so this was a pretty nice one here I wonder what's going to happen next guess we'll find out next time