Just starting to write fics, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
Page generated in 0.12 seconds
Total duration
610 users online
759,660 hits today, 1,996,409 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
It's midnight over here so I'll be reading this when I wake up, or at least looking at the comments to see if it is worth reading. It looks interesting so far. LOVE yu-gi-oh and glad someone made a crossover
I don't even know what to say. ummmmmmm...good job.
Wake up in Equestria? Beat the shit out of some ponies and rape!
"Every single character in those stories freaked out or did something stupid when they realized where they were. But Bruce was smarter then them, and much more perverse."
>Proceeds to beat the shit out of ponies and then attempts raping
Ha ha, I didn't expect that.
Um. Thanks? I guess.
This guys is a total dumbass for doing something like that, but this is seriously an awesome start
i have to admit i enjoyed it not in a sexual way but i enjoyed it great job
437307 Thanks.
this is fucking horrible
i mean... he tries to rape the mane 6
all i can say is
ME FUCKING GUSTA
437331 can we haz more please
438824 Sure.
438974 YAY THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED
[img]data:image/jpeg;base64,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
Hush!
I'm working on chapter two.
………………….._,,-~’’’¯¯¯’’~-,,
………………..,-‘’ ; ; ;_,,---,,_ ; ;’’-,…………………………….._,,,---,,_
……………….,’ ; ; ;,-‘ , , , , , ‘-, ; ;’-,,,,---~~’’’’’’~--,,,_…..,,-~’’ ; ; ; ;__;’-,
……………….| ; ; ;,’ , , , _,,-~’’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ¯’’~’-,,_ ,,-~’’ , , ‘, ;’,
……………….’, ; ; ‘-, ,-~’’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’’-, , , , , ,’ ; |
…………………’, ; ;,’’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’-, , ,-‘ ;,-‘
………………….,’-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’’-‘ ;,,-‘
………………..,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;__ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘-,’
………………,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,-‘’¯: : ’’-, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; _ ; ; ; ; ;’,
……………..,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;| : : : : : :| ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,-‘’¯: ¯’’-, ; ; ;’,
…………….,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘-,_: : _,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; | : : : : : :| ; ; ; |
……………,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ¯¯ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’-,,_ : :,-‘ ; ; ; ;|
…………..,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,,-~’’ , , , , ,,,-~~-, , , , _ ; ; ;¯¯ ; ; ; ; ;|
..…………,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,’ , , , , , , ,( : : : : , , , ,’’-, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;|
……….,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’, , , , , , , , ,’~---~’’ , , , , , ,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’,
…….,-‘’ ; _, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘’~-,,,,--~~’’’¯’’’~-,,_ , ,_,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘,
….,-‘’-~’’,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; | ; ; | . . . . . . ,’; ,’’¯ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,_ ; ‘-,
……….,’ ; ;,-, ; ;, ; ; ;, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘, ; ;’, . . . . .,’ ;,’ ; ; ; ;, ; ; ;,’-, ; ;,’ ‘’~--‘’’
………,’-~’ ,-‘-~’’ ‘, ,-‘ ‘, ,,- ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘, ; ; ‘~-,,,-‘’ ; ,’ ; ; ; ; ‘, ;,-‘’ ; ‘, ,-‘,
……….,-‘’ ; ; ; ; ; ‘’ ; ; ;’’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘’-,,_ ; ; ; _,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ;’-‘’ ; ; ; ‘’ ; ;’-,
……..,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;¯¯’’¯ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; , ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’’-,
……,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; |, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘-,
…..,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;|..’-,_ ; ; ; , ; ; ; ; ; ‘,
….,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; | ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,’…….’’’,-~’ ; ; ; ; ; ,’
…,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’~-,,,,,--~~’’’’’’~-,, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,’…..,-~’’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ,-
…| ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,’…,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,-‘
…’, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,’….’, ; ; ; ; _,,-‘’
….’, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,-‘’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,’…….’’~~’’¯
…..’’-, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;_,,-‘’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,-‘
………’’~-,,_ ; ; ; ; _,,,-~’’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,-‘
………..| ; ; ;¯¯’’’’¯ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,,-‘
………..’, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,-‘
…………| ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;|
…………’, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ~-,,___ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’,
………….’, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,-‘….’’-, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘,
………..,’ ‘- ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,-‘’……….’-, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘,
……….,’ ; ;’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ,,-‘…………….’, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’,
………,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,-‘’…………………’’-, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; |
……..,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,,-‘………………………’’, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; |
……..| ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,’…………………………,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;,’
……..| ; ; ; ; ; ; ,’………………………..,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,’’
……..| ; ; ; ; ; ;,’……………………….,-‘ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,-‘
……..’,_ , ; , ;,’……………………….,’ ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ,-‘
………’,,’,¯,’,’’|……………………….| ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘--,,
………….¯…’’………………………..’-, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’’~,,
……………………………………………’’-,, ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ;’’~-,,
………………………………………………..’’-, ; ; ; ; ; ,,_ ; ;’-,’’-,
…………………………………………………..’, ; ; ; ; ; ; ‘-,__,\\--\\.
……………………………………………………’-, ; ; ;,,-~’’’ \\ , ,|, |
………………………………………………………’’~-‘’_ , , ,,’,_/--‘
439195
. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . ,.-‘”. . . . . . . . . .``~.,
. . . . . . . .. . . . . .,.-”. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .“-.,
. . . . .. . . . . . ..,/. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ”:,
. . . . . . . .. .,?. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .\,
. . . . . . . . . /. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,}
. . . . . . . . ./. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,:`^`.}
. . . . . . . ./. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,:”. . . ./
. . . . . . .?. . . __. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . :`. . . ./
. . . . . . . /__.(. . .“~-,_. . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,:`. . . .. ./
. . . . . . /(_. . ”~,_. . . ..“~,_. . . . . . . . . .,:`. . . . _/
. . . .. .{.._$;_. . .”=,_. . . .“-,_. . . ,.-~-,}, .~”; /. .. .}
. . .. . .((. . .*~_. . . .”=-._. . .“;,,./`. . /” . . . ./. .. ../
. . . .. . .\`~,. . ..“~.,. . . . . . . . . ..`. . .}. . . . . . ../
. . . . . .(. ..`=-,,. . . .`. . . . . . . . . . . ..(. . . ;_,,-”
. . . . . ../.`~,. . ..`-.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..\. . /\
. . . . . . \`~.*-,. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ..|,./.....\,__
,,_. . . . . }.>-._\. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .|. . . . . . ..`=~-,
. .. `=~-,_\_. . . `\,. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .\
. . . . . . . . . .`=~-,,.\,. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .\
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . `:,, . . . . . . . . . . . . . `\. . . . . . ..__
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .`=-,. . . . . . . . . .,%`>--
I call your pedobear, and raise you facepalm.
30.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lqqxl5szVH1qbn7z0o1_100.jpg 439203
Spike plays blue eyes white dragon. O shit dragon plays dragon. fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/041/8/e/Blue_Eyes_White_Dragon_Card_by_JB_007.jpg
Sorry i had to.
I don't care if the story said he shuffled his deck, Bruce totally stacked it to get Exodia on the first turn, that just doesn't happen... freaken cheater
But aside from that the story is still nice, for now that is. It can go up or down depending if you make Bruce that lucky all the time(which I doubt), all I'm saying is that he better work for most of his victories to make this good. Though I'm going to assume that this was just the easiest way to make Twilight mad at him and force them to duel.
440206 Uh oh, somepony is revealing sensitive data.
(Yes Bruce Willis is a cheat. Sometimes.)
i want some one to at least have the blackwing deck beause thats my fav i even made one woop woop and could pretty much beat most decks
440949 Sorry but that deck is from 5d's. All cards are based on the first few shows when it was actually YUGI who was the mane character.
Also just a general warning, Human x (insert somepony here) is going to be in the story.
Man I almost called that perfectly, the only thing I got wrong was the reason to get Twilight mad
......Wut.
441395 Wut in a good way? Or a wut is this crap lol way?
441457 Wut in a "This is so fucking wierd.....BUT I LOVE IT!" kinda way.
441461Oh.
This is really getting good
Children's Card games!
441634 Indeed. So, what do you think of it?
Hard to describe but its so good
Cheating, what?! Wait... Twilight mad... Do you this she hated him for a little...
Hate detected... Firing the Orbital Friendship Cannon.
wow first fic that stopped me before I finished chapter one
444685 What do you mean?
444702 I got to about... paragragh three i think I'm not sure its just one of those opening chapters I can't read and I need to be able to read atleast chapter one or I will never read the story
444716 Oh that part.
Well if you skip a few paragraphs down it doesn't continue. That scene isn't important to the story anyway just put it as a slight parody of other HiE fictions.
Trust me the rest of the story is clop free.
444731 thank goodness I'll try but I'll be skeptical but I'll skip those paragrapghs then I'll be back
geno you have succeded and I will not hold chapter one against you... for now
444823memeorama.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/first-world-problems.jpg
Thank you sir.
444838 your welcome your comment leaves me confused
445441 Thanks.
445511 Wait.....you complimented my story....and you have a fic that got tens of thousands of views....
I'm not worthy
lol, smarter, huh? he just tried to rape Twilight. I don't think that counts as 'smarter'.
Just a bit of picky-me: Shaking your head is 'no'. Nodding your head is 'yes'.
Also, the 'V' you make with your hands is not a 'peace symbol', if that was your intention. It's a 'V' for 'Victory', which does not necessarily. mean peace.
-
Uh oh, both he and Celestia have encouraged non-lethal warfare that can destroy inanimate objects. Equestria is doomed.
Trixie Lulamoon
Is that really her name official-wise, or did you come up with it yourself? Lulamoon...sounds like an alcoholic beverage.
446932Thanks for pointing those things out. Yes Lulamoon is canon. Not the best last name though I agree with that. As for the Nixon v for victory, writing "he did the Nixon v for victory" makes me seem like a worse writer then I really am. And those cards destroyed the library! Seems pretty lethal to me. And I didn't see where I did the nodding over shaking thing but I'll be more specific with it in the future. Other then that did you like it?
447781
Yup.
Non-lethal as in 'it doesn't kill those that play it'. Well...not directly, at least. I suppose there's nothing to stop the ceiling from falling down on them, or a lava flow from a partially-destroyed volcano from roasting the players, or maybe starvation from destroying crops...
Silver Spoon?......Fuck dat bitch up.
lol poor luna still funny tho
Oh Trollestia, you make me laugh