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this got interesting, also is he like part pony now
4600571 Yup
which one derpicdn.net/media/W1siZiIsIjIwMTMvMDUvMDUvMjBfMjhfNTdfODU1XzMxNzQ5OF9fVU5PUFRfX3NhZmUuanBlZyJdXQ/317498__safe_rarity_humanized_anthro_socks_bipedal_scarf_upvotes%2Bgalore_transformation_artist-colon-shepherd0821_beatnik%2Brarity_pantyhose_semi-dash-anthro_furry%2Bchart.jpeg
4600691 I would say 4.7 since his only pony features are his eyes tail and magic. Elusive can still pass for human, it's just he looks obviously different.
ahhh OK so he should have a horn and tail and also magic
4600860 He doesn't have a horn, he's channels into mana with his hands. So no, there shall be no horn. But there may be a few other changes. Stay tuned.
nice :)
This is poo.
4602749 Two things, friend.
!. I think you're forgetting one of the Commandments of the group, Don't be a dick (or at least that's how I perceived It)
2. If you think my story is bad, then instead of saying it's "poo" you can tell me why it's bad in your comment. Until then I shall attempt to love and tolerate
Thank you for reading
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4613457 It's not that funny, pal. I'm just saying that I would like to keep this CIVIL I'd like to leave internet beefs with the teenagers if you don't mind. If you have nothing nice to say then please donec revertamur unde venisti ultra te. Return from whence you came, until you are whole again! (yes I"ve seen Tenacious D)
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Wow you really gave him a talking-to! 10/10 megaburn
well that is interesting so he is getting some of Rarity's emotions, also th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2013/098/e/f/pewdiepie_is_fabulous__x3_by_madiedraws-d60wc1b.jpg
4617680 For the record he's fabulous not FABULOUS. Elusive is not gay and this story was made to display that one may be into fashion and the like without being gay. But he doesn't have her emotions it's just his emotions are (temporarily)unstable. You think that's funny wait until next month (in story and quite possibly literally)
4617756 I swear after the next chapter, you may laugh your ass off
Okay, with the second chapter, I've picked up on your single biggest problem.
You've got way too much happening way too soon.
I could've gotten three chapters worth out everything you shovelled in this one.
Granted, I flat out refuse to write clop, but that's beside the point.
Is hunter going to bang apple bloom?
4621274 Now that would be telling, wouldn't it?
4620320 True but I tend to write, (relevant) flashbacks given that I'm working on one currently I think a little jam packing ain't as bad as me being overly vague. Either way I digress, Thank you for friendly input
4623082 I'm just glad you're not taking it as an 'attack' on your fic.
I've had that happen before.
4625653 only an arrogant bastard (which I am not) would turn their heads at constructive criticism.
<3
4806327 Merci beaucoup! No seriously, thank you for that
4819239 I don't speak French?(I'm not sure but I think its French) also love the work.
<3
4822392 Neither do I (not fluently at least) but yeah thanks for the comment.
The pacing is much better, but it feels like you skipped a bit too much.
4827023 I did. I was on meds when I wrote it. Truth be told this wasnt supposed to drop until next month. My addled mind skipped a bit and by that point I said fuck it and finished and modified it to fit as well as I could
4827046 Fair enough.
what...the....fuck?
I will stop here. you story don't have a fucking....single...logic.
Like...your story playing Sandbox mode.
Shortest chapter I've ever written
Update?
6811907 it's coming. Currently working on it.
... So ... That happened.
6846659 Yeah, most of that had been stuck for the better part of a year and I couldn't come up with a better name for the ponies. I'm already Story-boarding on the next few chapters.
Don't expect to see much of Celestia in this story. She's obviously an S class bitch in this world and writing her as such is killing me.
not a bad story, details are pretty good. an it's not just a clop fic!
) about the only current complaint, is a couple of your chapters feels like they could be moved around to make it flow better.
a good story, but if you can, maybe move some chapters around.
it actually has plot (forgive the pun
goes from being in the forest to staying with the apples pretty quick. ok, that's equestria for you so can follow. then mentions turning into a hybred pony, so moving forward...then we jump BACK to the doom tree an the plot line there.
just a suggestion
keep up the good work
8195465 Thank you for the comment.
I am happy that you find the tales of Elusive Hunter fascinating and hope that he keeps your interest. The next arch is in the works.
I GET IT.....I don't get it
Damn, I can't wait to write Midnight's reaction to the Hunter situation when this arc is done. It's going to so much fun
If I member correctly didn’t twilight say that he could not have children with a human unless their DNA was also spliced with the ponies and that he could get a Mare pregnant
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Absolutely Correct. But remember he gets spliced in the present. The last two arcs have been in the past. But you are indeed correct.
But, isn't Elusive not a real human name?
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Correct it's the name he took after the splicing. Full name being Ellusive Hunter.
Don't worry, this issue will be resolved soon. Had to split the chapter. It was going to be way to long for my liking otherwise.
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His full human name is Hunter Kirin Boniface. Was given his mother's surname.
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And yes, I am aware I didn't put Hunters true name in there
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