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silvergunner
The gothic furry everyone loves to hate.
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Needs an anthro tag.
4599062 They aren't anthros. They're ponies.
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Then why does Twilight cover her boobs?
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Because they're human? If so, needs a human tag.
Technically equines have their mammary glands ("breasts" in pop culture) located near their groins - all mammals have mammary glands - and i've seen them referred to as "crotchboobs" in MLP R34 artwork. But i'll change it now anyway to remove the boobies - mistake on my part for not clarifying it.
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Overall a good clop fic and I can't wait to read more!
Oh shit! We got a changeling in the house! I'll get my crossbow.
You know, it's sad how much Flashlight gets bashed. Oh well, I thought it was good.
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I don't know about this...
~DustyPwny
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I agree on both points. While human Flash Sentry didn't have much character and him being Equestria Girls' FRI (Forced Romantic Interest), Flash Sentry the pegasus has a lot more room for development, and the many fics that have him in a relationship (FlashLight or FlashArmor) show that.
Why be blunt about the part when flash lets twilight know that he's in love with her, maybe at least make him a little shy... just a suggestion.
This was interesting, first fanfic I've read that used so much "detail".
Good job anyway.
4620182 What do you mean by "Detail"? It would be nice if you could elaborate ^^
4604182 If I'm honest I did feel that bit was a teeny bit rushed. Part 3 shouldn't have any similar issues.
I'm hopefully going to have the third part up by the middle of next week. In the meantime, thanks to everyone for leaving comments. I really appreciate constructive feedback on my stories (pointing out silly errors especially) so if you've read this, please let me know what you think
well, that was something
As much as I love the FlashLight ship...
No.
Umm... I thought you said they were ponies... don’t they walk around naked all the time anyways? Oh... whatever...