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silvergunner
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The most consistent typo I've seen is the lack of punctuation before closing quotation marks. But there are plenty more that make this chapter in need of a second viewing. Try reading out loud or using a reading program like Natural Reader. Even Microsoft Word could catch a lot of these silly mistake that are probably turning off a lot of readers.
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I assume you mean lines like:
"You look tastier than a blueberry muffin" Sunset Shimmer smiled.
From my experience in writing and reading, there is no periods/full stops at the end of dialogue. Of course exclaimation marks and question marks are there for shouting and questioning respectively.
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When she’s performing an action, period.
"You look tastier than a blueberry muffin." Sunset Shimmer smiled.
When she’s voicing something, comma.
"You look tastier than a blueberry muffin,” Sunset Shimmer snarled.