Twilight Sparkle and Flash Sentry go on a little date. Occurs right after the events of Equestria Girls.
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oh boy, here comes the down votes.
be ready.
Loved it. Keep up the great work. Thumps up and fav.
You tried.
Some better story flow and grammar would be nice. You should fix that.
3947254 Looks like they haven't written many stories, and it may've taken a while before they got the idea. I do agree that there is room for improvement, but it does have a good plot and story line. You have admit that.
3947299 Yeah.
3947254 Well you might want to pointout some places where I went wrong. Because I've already missed them before.
I should look into getting an editor.
Go get him Twilight. Yeah. nice Story.
Good Work!
3947126 Yep: I noticed them too. So, to help offset that, I gave this story a thumbs-up.
Love. It.
Loved it!
Overall I liked it. Twilight was adorably awkward, & I liked how she kept overthinking what she needed to say or do on this date just like she does sometimes in the show. Nice to also see Flash also be a little awkward & nervous, so he's not just a generic nice guy. And, I don't think less of him for living with his mother - I can think of plenty of legitimate reasons why (most of which involve him being a good son & taking care of her), especially with her husbands passing.
The only thing I didn't like was the revaluation that Flashes father died protecting Twilight. While what Flash said to Twilight was wonderful, it felt like it came out of left field. If this was a longer story & this was something that came up later & they had to come to terms with it, that'd be different. As it is, honestly it felt like an excuse to end with a romantic kiss.
Still, at least the characterization was good & I felt like the date, overall, felt natural for the characters. So I'm still giving a thumbs up (if the site will let me.
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I cannot imagine something like that that will be very terrified and very sad to see something like that
Aww this was an adorable story so Twilight and the others are going back to Ponyville but she wanted to hang out with flash ever since she saw him she couldn't help but having feelings for him so she asked him to go on a date which they went to the restaurant and they talk about like history's their likes and dislikes and apparently one of the royal guard who protected Twilight was killed and it was Flash's father and Twilight never thought of that but flash wants to reassure her that what happened was not her fault his father did everything he could to protect the princess and it was pretty nice of him to say that to Twilight and with all that she kissed him and he kissed her back now this was a pretty nice story and I really like the shipping between those two keep up the good work