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This one surprised me. It can be a difficult trick to balance story with clop, because you have to take so much into consideration. But I enjoyed the vast display of emotions one went through, similar to the very rides Dinky makes Flash and Derpy go on. This is a wonderful creation. The lovemaking was also well done; despite being stuck with a limited word count due to the contest, you still depicted a tender, well-written sex scene that allowed for both emotional release as much as physical.
Job well done! I wish you luck in the contest!
Totally make this into a story it could be be really nice
that was a nice story, i loved how you portrayed Dinky
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Thanks! Hearing that from you means a lot. Good luck to you too.
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You mean a sequel? I could, but I'd have to come up with some new ideas
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I tried to think back to what it was like when I picked my little sister up from elementary years ago. Glad to know I did pretty well. Thanks for reading!
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you're welcome, she's my favorite foal
Not bad, honestly dont like flash that much but reading made me change an opinion or two, good story.
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Yeah, Flash isn't the most popular, but he's aight in my book. Thanks for reading, as always!
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Np my man š
Iām a sucker for a good Derpy story. And this was pretty good. Only wish it was longer
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Same, brother. It would've come out to be around 15k if I had my way, but that'd be way too much to dump on the contest judges, so I don't mind.