Spike wants to ask Rarity to be his girl, but has doubts she will return his affections. But a little friendly advice from an honest friend may be all he needs to take that chance.
Inspired by artwork from GeorgeGarza01 along with a some dialogue he used for said artwork. Cover art also by GeorgeGarza01
That ending reminds me of Bride of Discord
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i was thinking the same thing.
That was some nice advice from Applejack.
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Cool
Aww, that was a nice story you wrote, my friend. Applejack knows how to give great advice to her friends, especially Spike. Great work. đź‘Ť
Feels like a prologue to a possible new story
But I won't push my luck
Their friendship is very well written.
Good job!
How did you manage to put a little idea I had into something SO heartwarming, you nailed it as I pictured Spike and Applejack’s friendship dynamic be like, so well written I enjoyed every single part of it!
If you’re doing more I can’t wait to see what else can you do! I’ll sure look forward for more stories!
Fun fact: Even though “Sparity” will always be my favorite, I also find that Applejack will be great as Spike’s second love interest
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With the kind of fan art you made I'm sure I can find a new way to make Sparity one shots, or even bonding moments with Spike and others like Applejack
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Are you planning on writing other one shots with the rest of the Rainbooms and human Spike? If so, I’d read them.
I love the moment between the two, Applejack really helped Spike out.