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Fluttershyfan


I am co-admin of the fastest-growing brony website on the Internet, http://bronytale.proboards.com/index.cgi . My favorite pony is, of course, Fluttershy.

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The myth of Equestria's discovery is well known—it is told and retold each year by Hearth's Warming Eve pageants from Manehattan to Canterlot. The true origins of the nation are, however, far more complicated.

After defeating the Windigoes and forging an alliance between their three tribes, Chancellor Puddinghead, Commander Hurricane, and Princess Platinum—not to mention Smart Cookie, Private Pansy, and Clover the Clever—have an uphill battle to fight before they can convince everypony to stop fighting and live in harmony. Legions led by Hurricane's political opponents plunge the pegasi into civil war, Princess Platinum and her father struggle to maintain control over insurrection-minded unicorn nobles, and Chancellor Puddinghead's hooves are full trying to convince the other Earth pony leaders of the importance of this new alliance.

It's a world of intrigue, war, and disharmony. Before the colonization of the new region of Equestria, the disparate tribes of Ponyland must be brought together—but this may come at a price.

(Author's notes: inspiration was drawn, in part, from this image: http://sakuyamon.deviantart.com/art/Founders-of-Equestria-277451481?q=boost%3Apopular%20equestria&qo=2 The depictions of the characters in that image are how I imagine them to be in the story, including the gender decisions made by that artist.

Also, some dialogue between Princess Platinum and her father was inspired by the musical Les Misérables.)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 8 )

Not bad at all! You may want to consolidate the chapters together; these are a bit short.
Still, I'm curious to see how the creation of Equestria will progress from here.

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Thanks so much! I was wondering about whether or not I should put all the chapters in one part together or leave them separate—the form in which I was originally posting this was in a thread on a forum, which is why I divided them by scene.

i hope platinum wins (Cause a world in which windigoes can return is NOT a option
btw what are the other races thought on this (Minotaurs, zebra, donkey, and diamond dogs.)

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Thanks for taking an interest in my story! :pinkiehappy: I hope it's as fun to read as it has been to write.

As far as the other races, I haven't thought it through for all of them individually. The region of Ponyland is inhabited essentially exclusively by ponies, though there are probably some isolated enclaves of donkeys somewhere that keep to themselves. The only other race specifically mentioned in the story was the griffons—essentially, they're extremely hostile towards ponies, due to the devastation of their once-peaceful civilization by the pegasi, and are basically lying in wait in the Great Northern Mountains, licking their wounds and biding their time.

Oh, man. I just made a fanfic with the same name as this. I tried looked it up and found this.
Whoops.

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