Following the final battle between Princess Celestia and the corrupted Princess Luna, the sovereign ruler of Equestria finds herself overwhelmed emotionally by the event. To deal with this, Celestia journeys to the horizon, the ancient juncture between the Sun and the Earth, to meet her friend and cousin Princess Circadia, the embodiment of nature and all life that lives beneath Celestia's star.
The two go on to discuss Luna's fall and transformation into Night Mare Moon, and the realities of their existences as immortal alicorns.
I'll try to complete this story as soon as possible. I was inspired to write it tonight, and stayed up late pounding out the prologue.
Also, giving credit where credit is due, the cover picture is used with permission from Br0ny at DeviantArt. Check him out here: http://br0ny.deviantart.com/
April 22: Made a slight edit to the Prologue, replacing instances of the first-person pronoun with the royal "we." It occurred to me that the next chapter flowed better were that the case.
May 5: I changed my mind about the above! Heh heh. New update.
this looks like it will be.......alot of work. i hope you do well on this. good start and i didn't notice any grammar errors. good story that is believeable. Good luck with this story, i'll be watching
This looks promising! Good job on descriptions. It is believable, and sounds like it'll work well.
Promising, promising, but I'll reserve judgement until it gets underway and in full swing.
483144 Same here. I do very much love mythology fics, and this Horizon idea in itself is intriguing. Favorited, I hope to see more.
This is good! I think you should add in some important significance for the appearance of young!Celestia. The only text error I could see was a random bracket after "Get off!"
I'm looking forward to more of this!
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Thanks! I've got the plot worked out and there is significance to their younger selves appearing.
I think the bracket ended up there during formatting...somehow I clicked there when I meant to click somewhere else. I'll fix it. Thanks again!
i just read this a second time and....i think i need more. still think its a great story. could be very good. hope you continue your work on this.
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Thank you!
I am planning to continue it—and have the unedited complete version of the first part saved on my computer—but I've been pretty busy with the end of the school year and all sorts of extracurriculars. I'll be looking to continue it as soon as I can!