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Malcolm Merlyn


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Six humans are transported to Equestria during it's time of need. (This story is in desperate need of better cover art)

For some, it's to be paid. That is the case of Slade Wilson. With Equestria's large supply of gold and minerals, surely this will be a bounty worthy of a king. With the promise of a reward, he will not hesitate to claim it.

To the one called Steve Rogers, it is for what is right. The price of freedom was always high, but it was always something he was willing to pay, no matter whose freedom it is. He is in it for anything but himself. But perhaps... perhaps this little thing he was promised may be beneficial to everyone he knows.

James Raynor, too fights for freedom. As a bonus, he got to fight for someone else's wellbeing too now. And once this is all done and over with, he'll have more than enough funds and new methods to fight the oppressive dominion.

To the human called Medic. Not only is here for the money, but for the sake of self betterment and SCIENCE. Who knows what magic could do for his research? (And hey, he wouldn't need to cut any unfortunate soul up in the process... that isn't to say he wouldn't want to though...)

To the one called Sanya V. Litvyak it's just so she can be with her parents again. Nothing more.

And lastly, to the boy called Armin Arlert, it's for a safer, a better way to fight and defend against the monsters that are ravaging his homeland.

Chapters (56)
Comments ( 250 )

Okay i know you posted the today but how is theres not more? You get a fav and watch

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You kinda said it...
It's still only day 1.

But... I'll try. :unsuresweetie:

4601087 thank you but you dont have to rush as they say you cant rush perfection im not trying to make you rush just saying how much i like the story!
:pinkiehappy: edit: just realized that i said rush alot sorry

What the hell?
This is like so many different characters. I have no idea where you're going with this.

I'm going to favorite, only in the interest and hope that this could somehow be pulled off both well, and in an interesting way.

You're lucky I'm drunk enough to care about the three characters I know. Aside from Steve. slade and Medic, I have no idea who these other weirdos are. Now let's get this train wreck'a rollin.

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THERE ARE NO BREAKS OF THIS WRECK TRAIN! LET'S GO SO FAST, IT'LL CRASH REALLY HARD

Okay. Enough sleep depravity, caffeine and candy . I am going to bed.

I'm watching you . . .:pinkiesmile:

This fic is awesome... "sqwee"

This isn't bad, I'll give it a watch for now but what happens after that depends on how your next chapters go.

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Thanks. But still a work in progress just started the thing. Good thing some people already like it!

As this has my favorite member of the 501st Joint Fighter Wing, I will add to my read later list to watch how it goes from here. :twilightsmile:

holy crap the ultimate crossover PRAISE THE BUILDER!

This doesn't seem too bad. This could be decent, maybe. Keep going.

This is a great story. Is something outside the normal . Looking real forward to the next chapters

You know... Captain America and Deathstroke probably get along a lot better than Captain America would get along with Deadpool

I require more of this

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...I am now curious. Why do you think that is?
Is it the 'mania' aspect? :pinkiecrazy:

4621877 Nope. Just the thought of "controlled" chaos and things making a nice boom. :pinkiecrazy: Preferably a hydrogen bomb boom or a fleiya.:pinkiehappy:

Deathstroke = Badass. 'Nuff said.

His story is a lot more clear-cut and easy to know than a certain merc that was based off of him. Good idea having him be in instead of the other one that I refer to.

Don't be updating too fast, you'll get writers block. Just some advice.
But I look forward to the next chapter.

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I'll be keeping that in mind. But right now, I am alone in a dark room with my laptop, a ton of ideas and a cup of coffee....

Yeah.

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Creepy noises in the background?

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I guess if you count Alduin's voicelines from Skyrim to be creepy. Yes. I'll leave everything at that.

More characters?

Really?

6 wishes for 6 elements? There's like 8 people!:flutterrage:

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I maybe should have said something about this earlier.

Alduin is not in this. I just thought it'd be funny if I knocked off borrowed from skyrim when the main antagonist is some evil dragon guy. Not to mention... I always thought the Dragon language in skyrim was one of the most awesome things ever.

So to leave it at this...

I am knocking off Skyrim's dragon language. That's about it.

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Reasonable enough I suppose...

Onward soldier! Continue this story!

Not bad. I can give suggestions if you ever wish to put in "tone music" to set moods for significant scenes. weddings, fights, armageddons... uh ignore that last one.

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Please do actually! That'd really appreciated.

4633759 right then. I'll pm them to you. Don't want to have any spoilers for the other readers :3. Just let me know what kind of scene you're going for and I'll do my utmost best to find the correct tune.

Note of advice, tell who talking. I kinda got confused on who talking.

I noticed that you mentioned this takes place before S4 finale...if that's true, then the Elements would be reinserted into the Tree of Harmony. I hope you meant S4 premiere, as that makes more sense.

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LOLWHOOPS. Someone got their episodes mixed up. :facehoof:

Fixed.

I recognize Armin, Captain America, and the Medic, somebody mind telling me who the other three are?

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Slade Aka Deathstroke from Teen Titans! (I remember him from Teen titans but if he's originally from another show, tell him!)

Jim Raynor, a terran from the Starcraft franchise!

The girl, I don't know!

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Armin Arlert: Attack on Titan
Steve Rogers: Captain America, The Avengers, Captain America 2 (Cause, Cap here is based on his movie version.
Jim Raynor: StarCraft franchise
Slade Wilson: Arkham Origins with his character being drawn from every version of him
The Medic: TF2
Sanya V. Litvyak: Strike Witches

4633082 Aw, an evil dragon? My story is about how not all dragons are evil, AND THEN YOU MADE AN EVIL DRAGON!

Comment posted by Malcolm Merlyn deleted Jul 4th, 2014

Somehow I wouldn't be surprised if his science involved a talking head that constantly said "kill me"

Awsome I guess...
1 problem thought, not about the story but about the battle cruiser and I'm assuming that the ship is Jim's Hyperion behemoth battlecruiser. Jim's ship look and act more like a battleship than a battlecruiser. Battleship is a hard hitting, taking heavy fire, front line warship. Battlecruiser is hard hitting, flank defense and harrass, raid, hit and run, sacrifying armor for speed warship, can die easily on the front battle line.

you know... i think this story needs at least one invincible disembodied head joke. maby even a liveing bread joke but that would require a teleporter so that mightnotactuallyworkandnowimrantingwhiletypingsothisisnotgoingtoworkout.:derpytongue2:

just keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

God forbid these guys(espessially the medic) tell their stories to Fluttershy, the poor dear may never recover.

That medic is going to be more dangerous the the gangs health the dragon.

I do have one last question for the medic. Are you going to choose an animal yourself? Or are you going to ask Fluttershy and most likely get the stuffing kicked out of you?

And I do have another theme for you for the next time a dragon attacks:

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