Simultaneously able to type 94 wpm and still take five years to finish a story. If you're feeling generous, throw a ko-fi at me.
Nopony goes out at night anymore. They all live in fear of the Dentists, the crazed ponies who lurk in the night and catch unsuspecting wanderers. Their latest victim was a young unicorn mare named Pumpkin Cake.
Distraught and desperate, Pound Cake turns to the one who started it all. If it started with her, maybe it can end with her, too. Besides, Pinkie Pie isn't that insane... is she?
Not to be taken too seriously.
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I already like it
Well this story isn't scary or creepy at all. And I am certainly not regretting having started this at 3 o'clock in the morning when it's pitch dark outside and stuff. Totally not freaking out right now.
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It has a happy ending if that makes you feel any better?
4586946 it helps, but the dentists still creep me the hell out.
Hmm... methinks Pound Cake wants to pound Pinkie Pie's pinkie pie, if ya catch my drift. Wink wink nudge nudge give-it-a-whirl
And yes, I am so going to Pony Hell for those puns.
Heh, I think you really should add a comedy tag to this fic...
Also, I am pretty sure if Pound could break the 4th wall, he'd be sad to know that this was a Teen rated fic aka meaning he ain't gonna get some of Pinkie's pie!
Out of curiosity, is there a particular reason you use anthro? I just noticed because you've done it at least twice
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I'll add one.
Not this time. Poor Pound!
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I'm not sure. It's just how it popped into my head. :shrug: Anthro seems to be good for my less-serious stories.
I think ya forgot something here dude.
Fun stuff... make more of this!
This story, in one word, is amazing and I've only gone to the second chapter. Well done, my amazingly talented writer, well done.
You should write more, that was amazing!!
Yeesh, so all this,module to one guy wanting to make more money? I just hope Pinkie when she snapped didn't hurt poor Dash too badly... While she's certainly still Pinkie crazy, she doesn't seem like a equicidal maniac anymore, so, hopefully, all will be good again. Is it wrong that I can't help but imagine Pound with his baby face which makes me laugh? I like this Pinkie, she's been in an asylum for nearly 20 years but she's coped and she does seem remorseful for her actions, and, she's hot and she knows it.
This means war indeed, Pinkie may be nice, but even she has limits, you hurt her family, and she will make you pay.
Now this, is why I enjoy Pinkie Pie, she may be crazy and sometimes a but strange, but she has a heart of gold and will do anything to make some pony (or somebody if it's a humanized fic) happy.
Poor Colgate, she's so far in her insanity that can't see that the return of sugar is a good thing, dentists can now have their jobs back because they will be needed.
I've already read this story twice over, this is the third time, but I simply adore this way too much. Every time I read it, it just seems to get better. The pictures you paint become clearer and then they seem to become an actual show in my head. You've done more than create a story and visualize it, you've made other people actually see it as a movie. Well done!
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Thanks!
That's exactly what I'm trying for, so this is probably the best compliment I could ever receive.
5545527 No problem whatsoever! I love this story way too much. It captures Pinkie perfectly, to be honest. And it's adorable and awesome and action packed and it's just *cannot handle awesomeness*
This story made me go 'what' over and over again XD
It should have the random tag on it (there's a suggestion I don't think I've ever made before).
It was pretty well written, though the ending....well, felt like it was rushed and didn't have proper closure. But the story was good comedy