• Published 31st Aug 2012
  • 1,242 Views, 19 Comments

The Rainbow Road of Broken Dreams - Wolokai



In Rainbow Dash's broken, twisted, and horrific world, the true meaning of Loyalty will be revealed

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Comments ( 18 )

this was pretty awsome

Great first chapter! :pinkiehappy: I will definitely be following this.

Cant read this late. Will most likely cry to sleep. Will watch in morning, where i have plenty of minds obviously comforting me :fluttercry:

Beautiful fic man

I'm getting chills reading those last lines!

~Have a good one.

I applaud your avoidance of the fanon curse words, but... maybe you could tone it down? Every other spoken line has a curse word in it. Ponies that actually curse are refreshing, but ponies that curse constantly are juvenile and uninspired.

Interested in the next chapter!!!

mind if i use that full name ya got there? Im gonna have a part where i constantly call her by that.

i love it i knew i was going to be in for a ride with this fic cuz all your others took me for a ride i can't wait for more

Green Day's 'Boulevard of Broken Dreams' came to mind in those last lines.

Any update on this?

Awesome! Great song choice too. Can't wait to read some more if its updated again.

please update bro this is a depressing story im eager to find out more

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