as Pinkie reentered Sugarcube Corner, she rushed to her room upstairs and looked for anything useful(still wondering why Shining needed anything that makes a loud noise), she hound a horn, a trumpet, etc. once she found anything she found "useful" she made her way back down stairs along with her iconic party cannon. You can never be too sure.
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back at the "battle"
Loud booms could all around as buildings crumbled, and blasts of magic hit everywhere.
a rainbow blur hit the ground covered in dirt, followed by an orange and white blurs both slamming the side of a house (not killing them of course,) while Venom as an alicorn had a hold of Fluttershy in her magical grasp.
"We are starting to wonder how it is you five got the elements, when you can't even fight with ours missing" Venom chuckled while looking at Fluttershy.
"You were the one who helped us figure out who we are twilight!" Fluttershy whimpered nearly gasping for air, while Venom simply growled at her.
"you always were kindest of us. But you could never make the hardest decisions!" growled Venom threatening to kill her. Until a rainbow blur hit her in the back letting go of Fluttershy.
"Lay anther hoof on her and I'll buck the crap out you symbiote!" shouted Rainbow Dash in a threatening manner.
not amused; Venom bucked Rainbow off her, flew up, grabbed Rainbow's tail with her teeth, and threw her to the ground.
"we all may have been the elements in the past but now there shall ONLY BE ONE!!” roared Venom as she raised her hooves in slow motion to crush Rainbow's skull, then a blast of magic hit Venom in the side, making her turn to Shining Armor who looked worn out
"Twily *GASP* this madness has *GASP* to end!" said Shining Armor trying to catch a breath.
"WE SAID NEVER TO CALL US THAT HOW MANY TIMES DO WE HAVE TO SAY IT!!!!" shouted Venom angrier than ever.
With that said Shining shot another beam at Venom, but this time Venom was ready and vanished and reappeared behind Shining who was shocked, Venom just smirked and bucked Shining, who went head first through one house and into another.
"YOU CALL YOURSELVES THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY, WITH OUT US YOU ARE NOTHI-AAAAAHHHHHH." Venom shouted only until she was hit in the back by a powerful magic blast sending her crashing into town hall.
"CELESTIA!" they all cried.
"Hope I'm not late." stated Celestia
"well actually your just in time your Highness." stated Shining, as Celestia looked at all the damaged houses and buildings.
all turned as they heard a loud roar coming under the rubble of town hall.
Venom came charging out heading straight for Celestia with rage in Venom's eyes ramming Celestia sending her into a house.
"WE HAVE HAD ENOUGH OF THIS NOW THAT ALL OF YOU ARE HERE TO WITNESS YOUR DEMISE!!!!" Venom shouted with rage filled eyes. As she was ready to start with Celestia she soon realized that one was missing. The pink one, Pinkie Pie!
Without warning a really loud noise hit her eardrums, Venom then got down on the ground roaring in pain.
right behind Venom was Pinkie with large speakers hooked to a microphone( how or where Pinkie got those we may never know.) while Pinkie was blowing into her instrument with all her might.
"NOOOOOO!" Venom cried out in pain as the symbiote slowly reaped away from its host.
Twilight was soon seen as she fell the ground unconscious.
The symbiote tried to recover and started crawling back to Twilight, but just then Spike appeared with a mysterious bottle and scooped up the symbiote, trapping the creature inside.
"Well that went well." muttered Rainbow.
"We'll keep this little guy locked away in Canterlot for the time being." stated Celestia.
All nodded in agreement.
"Will ah say that be a job will done." Applejack said carried by both Fluttershy and Rarity.
Shining turned walked to the unconscious Twilight, hung his head low.
"This is all my fault I should have believed her back at the wedding." said Shining with sadness in his voice .
"We'll get her to a hospital as quick as possible." Celestia said now standing next to him.
"Then what?" he asked
"We'll find out when that time comes."
to be continued...
This should be as Pinkie reentered Sugarcube Corner, she rushed to her room upstairs and looked for anything useful(still wondering why Shining needed anything that makes a loud noise), she hound a horn, a trumpet, etc. once she found anything she found "useful" she made her way back down stairs along with her iconic party cannon. You can never be too sure.
This should be Loud booms could all around as buildings crumbled, and blasts of magic hit everywhere.
This should be a rainbow blur hit the ground covered in dirt, followed by an orange and white blurs both slamming the side of a house (not killing them of course,) while Venom as an alicorn had a hold of Fluttershy in her magical grasp.
This should be "We are starting to wonder how it is you five got the elements, when you can't even fight with mine missing" Venom chuckled while looking at Fluttershy. (there are six elements of harmony, not five, therefore there are five ponies that she would be wondering about, not four)
This should be "You were the one who helped us figure out who we are twilight!" Fluttershy whimpered nearly gasping for air, while Venom simply growled at her.
This should be "you always were kindest of us. But you could never make the hardest decisions!" growled Venom threatening to kill her. Until a rainbow blur hit her in the back letting go of Fluttershy.
This should be "Lay anther hoof on her and I'll buck the crap out you symbiote!" shouted Rainbow Dash in a threatening manner.
This should be "we all may have been the elements in the past but now there shall ONLY BE ONE!!” roared Venom as she raised her hooves in slow motion to crush Rainbow's skull, then a blast of magic hit Venom in the side, making her turn to Shining Armor who looked worn out.
This should be "Twily GASP this madness has GASP to end!" said Shining Armor trying to catch a breath.
This should be "WE SAID NEVER TO CALL US THAT HOW MANY TIMES DO WE HAVE TO SAY IT!!!!" shouted Venom angrier than ever.
This should be With that said Shining shot another beam at Venom, but this time Venom was ready and vanished and reappeared behind Shining who was shocked, Venom just smirked and bucked Shining, who went head first through one house and into another.
This should be "YOU CALL YOURSELVES THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY, WITH OUT US YOU ARE NOTHI-AAAAAHHHHHH." Venom shouted only until she was hit in the back by a powerful magic blast sending her crashing into town hall.
This should be "Hope I'm not late." stated Celestia
This should be "well actually your just in time your Highness." stated Shining, as Celestia looked at all the damaged houses and buildings.
This should be all turned as they heard a loud roar coming under the rubble of town hall.
This should be Venom came charging out heading straight for Celestia with rage in Venom's eyes ramming Celestia sending her into a house.
This should be "WE HAVE HAD ENOUGH OF THIS NOW THAT ALL OF YOU ARE HERE TO WITNESS YOUR DEMISE!!!!" Venom shouted with rage filled eyes. As she was ready to start with Celestia she soon realized that one was missing. The pink one, Pinkie Pie!
This should be Without warning a really loud noise hit her eardrums, Venom then got down on the ground roaring in pain.
This should be right behind Venom was Pinkie with large speakers hooked to a microphone( how or where Pinkie got those we may never know.) while Pinkie was blowing into her instrument with all her might.
This should be "NOOOOOO!" Venom cried out in pain as the symbiote slowly reaped away from its host.
This should be Twilight was soon seen as she fell the ground unconscious.
This should be The symbiote tried to recover and started crawling back to Twilight, but just then Spike appeared with a mysterious bottle and scooped up the symbiote, trapping the creature inside.
This should be "well that went well." muttered Rainbow.
This should be "we'll keep this little guy locked away in Canterlot for the time being." stated Celestia.
This should be All nodded in agreement.
This should be "Will ah say that be a job well done." Applejack said carried by both Fluttershy and Rarity.
This should be right behind Venom was Pinkie with large speakers hooked to a microphone (how or where Pinkie got those we may never know.) while Pinkie was blowing into her instrument with all her might.
This should be They all turned as they heard a loud roar coming under the rubble of town hall.
This should be "well actually you’re just in time your Highness."
This should be Venom shouted angrier than ever.
This should be "We all may have been the elements in the past but now there shall ONLY BE ONE!!”
This should be not amused Venom bucked Rainbow off her, flew up, grabbed Rainbow's tail with her teeth, and threw her to the ground.
This should be "Lay another hoof on her and I'll buck the crap out you symbiote!"
This should be "You always were kindest of us. But you could never make the hardest decisions!"
This should be "You were the one who helped us figure out who we are Twilight!"
This should be A rainbow blur hit the ground covered in dirt, followed by an orange and white blurs both slamming the side of a house (not killing them of course,) while Venom as an alicorn had a hold of Fluttershy in her magical grasp
This should be As Pinkie reentered Sugarcube Corner, she rushed to her room upstairs and looked for anything useful (still wondering why Shining needed anything that makes a loud noise), she hound a horn, a trumpet, etc. Once she found anything she found "useful" she made her way back down stairs along with her iconic party cannon.
The second part of this includes repeats of the first part of this. However, the repeats aren't actually repeats, because there are still things that are incorrect. Sorry about that.
i have to say i had hoped twilight would be victorious, too sad i was wrong
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Dude, I feel ya. But hey, I use to hate this story, but after watching Venom, I like this story. Its one of my favorite stories now. Besides, Twilight did feel upset about how no one stood beside her and has total rights for wanting to get back. If someone hurt me in the wrong way, I would've totally done the same thing. But it was nice to see that they knew that Twilight would never want to kill her friends, especially her little brother, Spike, and her big brother, Shining Armor.