Time: 9:30 a.m.
As the morning has got only half done five ponies can be seen approaching the library tree.
"Ah wonder where Twilight is, ah haven't seen her all morning." Applejack said as she walked to the library tree.
"Oh you worry too much the egghead is probably just doing more of her studying." Rainbow said with an eye-roll after the word "studying" was said.
"Well I...um...wouldn't hold...um...against her it has been a week since the wedding." Fluttershy said as quite as can be.
"And besides I'm sure the darling is just catching up with all the studying." Rarity said.
"Even after the super duper fun wedding last week?" Pinkie Pie said, hopping all the way as usual.
"Ah'm just gonna check on Twi just to be safe." Applejack said as she raised a hoof.
Knock knock
"Hmm, no answer, that's weird. We almost always hear Spike "groan" or Twilight go "Spike get the door" which is silly since Spike would have to tear the door off the complete the order." Pinkie said and finished with a squee.
All the others just give Pinkie blank looks. Applejack then opened the door, to her surprise to find the place covered in what looked like "web".
"What in tarnaison happened here?" Applejack asked with wide eyes.
"Looks like the egghead really let the place go." Rainbow said as she flew around the place looking for any form of life or anything not covered in web."
Fluttershy seems to want find a reason to leave, but her worries for Twilight keep her from doing that.
"My word this place needs to be kept clean more often. Remind me to get Twilight to hire an exterminator when we find her." Rarity said trying to keep from touching the webs.
Suddenly they all hear a low "groan" from inside Twilight's bedroom.
"Now that’s what I was waiting to hear." Pinkie said somehow knowing it was Spike.
They all run/fly up to the bedroom, where they find Spike in a web still groaning.
"Spike!" They all said out of fear.
"Hold on partner we’ll have ya out as soon as possible." Applejack said as she Rainbow and Pinkie are tearing at the web.
Fluttershy caught spike before he hit the ground, "He's unconscious but alive." Fluttershy said with a hint of sadness in her voice.
"My little spiky-wiky." Rarity said near to tears.
"Whoever did this most have got to Twilight too." Rainbow said angrily.
"No silly fillies she's right there." Pinkie said with a giggle while pointing a hoof to what looks Twilight walking in from who knows where.
"What's going on?" Twilight said almost as though she was unaware of the webs all around her.
"What the hay do you mean by that?!” Rainbow said a little anger still present. "Do you not see all the webs every where?"
"Ya so." Twilight said without even flinching at Rainbow's outburst.
"Are you alright sugarcube, you don't seem to be your normal self." Applejack said with a raised eyebrow
"I'm fine." Twilight said trying to avoid eye contact.
"Ya we've heard that before, now what are you hiding Twi." Rainbow said with her hooves crossed.
"I SAID I'M FINE." Twilight shouted with a dark tone.
Everypony froze from what they heard.
"Now leave!" Twilight said with anger in her voice.
"And what if we say NO!" Rainbow said in defense with Applejack standing next to her.
For a minute there was silence in the room, until Twilight did what they all didn't expect.
A black liquid moved over Twilight revealing something worst then any other enemy the elements ever faced.
It had white dagger like teeth in rows, along with fearsome white eyes and what looked like a spider logo that was pure white on its chest.
The rest of its body was colored pitch black. It let out a menacing roar that felt like daggers hitting your face.
All frozen now completely in fear, Rainbow and Applejack broke away from their fear and charged at the monster.
"Ah don't know what has gotten a hold of you Twilight but your not doing any more damage then you have already done to yourself." Applejack said circling the beast, twilight had none of it and slammed Applejack into the door.
"There is no Twilight, there is only VENOM!" Venom hissed "and we will enjoy your death."
"Whatever you call yourself NOPONY ATTACKS MY FRIENDS AND GETS AWAY WITH IT!" Rainbow shouted, which Venom didn't even flinch which only made Rainbow angrier, she swoops down to take the, she swoops down to take the thing out but to her surprise the beast take in its horn and grows out wings and takes off towards Rainbow with some as a "whaa" Venom gets a hold of Rainbow and throws her into the wall.
"How pathetic can you all be and we were hopping for a challenge." Venom said as she hissed " we never felt powerful in our life. Now..." She hissed as she revealed her true face.
"Twilight..." Fluttershy said only to be cut short by Venom.
"DO NOT CALL US THAT WE ARE VENOM NOW!!" Twilight/Venom shouts making Fluttershy shrink.
"Why are you doing this Twilight?" Rarity said both with worry and anger.
"And WHY are you talking like Luna?" Pinkie asked while Rarity and Fluttershy facehoofed in the background.
Ignoring Pinkie's question, Venom answered Rarity's question" you all mean to tall me you don't remember back at the wedding, that we know that we know that the changeling queen was imposing as Cadence, you all, our brother, Spike, even Celestia believed that we were crazy...."
"Is that what this is about I thought we already put that behind us." Rainbow said flying back after over hearing the "speech".
"SHUT UP!!" Venom shouted bucking Rainbow back into the wall.
"Anyway...now that we have the power we will make sure that day will never happen AGAIN!!" Venom growled as she stomped her hooves on the ground with enough force to create a tidal wave. "Now all of you will pay a great price for that day with your lives." Venom said while hissing.
"ENOUGH!!" Fluttershy shouted, putting down Spike in Rarity's hooves. first you attack Spike then you attack both Rainbow Dash and Applejack, and now you threaten us for something that was already put behind us. I'm sorry Twilight but you've left me no choice." She said in a angry tone that everypony knows too well.
Fluttershy then walked to Venom but stopped right in front of her. Fluttershy then closed her eyes and opened them back up revealing what all thought she would never have to use on another pony. She was using "the stare".
Venom soon was overcome by this unknown force but she then roars at Fluttershy who doesn't move a muscle, when suddenly an orange blur whams into Venom sending her out the window where they all hear a loud thud.
"Hey sugarcube didn't know you had in you." Applejack said as she comes back to Fluttershy.
"Ya..um...neither did I." Fluttershy said trying to attract anymore eyes to herself.
"Uh girls Twi is gone!" Rainbow said while looking out the window.
"Well I think it's too late to say that this whole room reminds me of a movie where radioactive waste is dumped and mutates spiders into Giant pony-eating spiders." Pinkie said without to take in a breath.
"What are you talking about Pinkie and more importantly what the buck are movies?" Rainbow said in a irritated tone.
Pinkie simply shrugged.
"But in all seriousness I for one think we should get Spike to send a letter to Celestia to tell her what maybe she knows what that thing is that must have control of Twilight." Rarity said
"Ya as soon as he wakes up." Rainbow stated
As soon as she said that Spike suddenly woke up. "Oh my head feels like it was thrown to Canterlot and back." Spike said as he sees everypony looking at him. "What?" Spike said suddenly looking around then he sees he's in RARITY'S ARMS!! He then jumps landing on the ground, everypony knew he'd figure it out soon enough.
Anyway what just happened where's Twi?" Spike said, still blushing from earlier.
"We’ll tell you soon but right now we need you to send a letter to Celestia." Fluttershy said.
"I'm on it." Spike said as he saluted then takes off to get a letter and quill.
"Twi what have we done to you?" Rarity said to herself as a tear could be seen, Applejack came to support her.
"Don't worry Rarity we'll get her back one way or another." Applejack said as she glances to the picture of all them at the wedding with Shining armor and Cadence, now with Twilight torn out from the rest of them.
"Ah hope."
To be continued...
Ah an Eight-Legged Freaks reference. I like this story, the grammar needs to be fixed a bit but aside from that it's a great story.
This should be Applejack said as she glances to the picture of all them at the wedding with Shining armor and Cadence, now with Twilight torn out from the rest of them.
This should be "Don't worry Rarity we'll get her back one way or another."
This should be "we'll tell you soon but right now we need you to send a letter to Celestia." Fluttershy said
This should be "Anyway what just happened where's twi?" Spike said,still blushing from earlier.
This should be everypony knew
This should be him. "What?"
Sorry about the fact that the corrections are split into multiple comments for the other chapters, I am currently using a PS3 to access the internet. Now that I've got that out of the way, on with the corrections!
This should be "Ah wonder where Twilight is, ah haven't seen her all morning." Applejack said as she walked to the library tree.
This should be "Oh you worry too much the egghead is probably just doing more of her studying." Rainbow said with a eye-roll after the word "studying" was said.
"Well I..um..wouldn't hold..um..against her it has been a week since the wedding."
This should be "And besides I'm sure the darling is just catching up with all the studying." Rarity said.
"Even after the super duper fun wedding last week?" Pinkie Pie said, hopping all the way as usual.
This should be "Hmm, no answer, that's weird. We almost always hear Spike groan or Twilight go "Spike, get the door" which is silly since Spike would have to tear the door off in order to complete the order." Pinkie said and finished with a squee.
This should be All the others just gave Pinkie blank looks.
This should be "Looks like the egghead really let the place go." Rainbow said as she flew
This should be to want find a reason to leave, but her worries for Twilight keep her from doing that.
This should be "My word this place needs to be kept clean more often remind me to get Twilight to hire an exterminator when we find her."
This should be Suddenly they all hear a low "groan" from inside Twilight's bedroom.
This should be "Now that was what I was waiting to hear." Pinkie said somehow knowing it was Spike.
This should be They all run/fly up to the bedroom, where they find Spike in a web, still groaning.
This should be "Hold on partner we'll have ya out as soon as possible."
This should be Applejack said as she, Rainbow, and Pinkie are tearing up the web.
This should be Fluttershy said with a hint of sadness in her voice.
This should be "Whoever did this must have got to Twilight too." Rainbow said angrily.
This should be while pointing a hoof to what looks like Twilight walking in from who knows where.
This should be "Do you not see all the webs everywhere?"
I will combine all of the comments when I get access to a computer.
This should be Twilight said without even flinching at Rainbow's outburst.
This should be "Are you alright sugarcube, you don't seem to be your normal self." Applejack said with a raised eyebrow.
This should be "Yeah we've heard that before, now what are you hiding Twi." Rainbow said with her hooves crossed.
This should be Twilight shouted with a dark tone.
This should be Everypony froze from what they heard.
This should be Rainbow said in defense with Applejack standing next to her.
This should be until Twilight did what they all didn't expect.
This should be A black liquid moved over Twilight revealing something worse than any other enemy the elements had ever faced.
This should be It had white dagger like teeth in rows
This should be what looked like a spider logo that was pure white on its chest.
This should be The rest of its body was colored pitch black.
This should be It let out a menacing roar that felt like daggers hitting your face.
This should be All frozen now completely in fear, Rainbow and Applejack broke away from their fear and charged at the monster.
This should be Applejack said, circling the beast, Twilight had none of it and slammed Applejack into the door.
This should be "Whatever you call yourself
This should be NOPONY ATTACKS MY FRIENDS AND GETS
This should be AWAY WITH IT!" Rainbow shouted, which Venom
This should be didn't even flinch
This should be which only made Rainbow angrier, she swoops down to take the
This should be thing out but to her surprise the beast take in its horn and grows out wings
This should be and takes off towards Rainbow with some as a "whaa" Venom gets a hold of Rainbow and throws her into the wall.
This should be She hissed as she revealed her true face.
This should be "Twilight..." Fluttershy said only to be cut short by Venom.
This should be Twilight/Venom shouts making Fluttershy shrink.
This should be "Why are you doing this Twilight?"
This should be Rarity said both with worry and anger.
This should be Rarity and Fluttershy facehoofed in the background.
This should be Ignoring Pinkie's question, Venom answered Rarity's question
This should be that we know that the changeling queen was imposing as Cadence
This should be "Is that what this is about I thought
This should be Venom shouted bucking Rainbow back into the wall.
This should be "Anyway...now that we have the power we will make sure that day will never happen AGAIN!!" Venom growled as she stomped her hooves on the ground with enough force to create a tidal wave. "Now all of you will pay a great price for that day with your lives." Venom said while hissing.
This should be first you attack Spike then you attack both Rainbow Dash and Applejack, and now you threaten us for something that was already put behind us. I'm sorry Twilight but you've left me no choice." She said in a angry tone that everypony knows too well.
This should be shouted, putting down Spike in Rarity's hooves.
This should be "ENOUGH!!"
This should be Fluttershy then then walked to Venom but stopped right in front of her.
This should be Fluttershy then closed her eyes and opened them back up revealing what all thought she would never have to use on another pony.
This should be Venom soon was overcome by this unknown force but she then roars at Fluttershy who doesn't move a muscle, when suddenly a orange blur whams into Venom sending her out the window where they all hear a loud thud.
This should be "Hey sugarcube didn't know you had in you." Applejack said as she comes back to Fluttershy.
This should be "Ya..um...neither did I." Fluttershy said trying to attract anymore eyes to herself.
This should be "Uh girls Twi is gone!"
This should be "Well I think it's to late to say that this whole room reminds me of a movie where radioactive waste is dumped and mutates spiders into Giant pony-eating spiders."
This should be "What are you talking about Pinkie and more importantly what the buck are movies?"
This should be "But in all seriousness I for one think we should get Spike to send a letter to Celestia to tell her what maybe she knows what that thing is that must have control of Twilight."
This should be As soon as she said that Spike suddenly woke up. "Oh my head feels like it was thrown to Canterlot and back."
This should be "But in all seriousness I for one think we should get Spike to send a letter to Celestia to tell her what maybe she knows what that thing is that must have control of Twilight."
This should be As soon as she said that Spike suddenly woke up. "Oh my head feels like it was thrown to Canterlot and back."
This should be Applejack came to support her.
This should be "What the hay do you mean by that?!”
This should be along with fearsome white eyes
This should be she swoops down to take the thing out but to her surprise the beast take in its horn and grows out wings and takes off towards Rainbow with some as a "whaa" Venom gets a hold of Rainbow and throws her into the wall.
This should be Anyway what just happened where's Twi?" Spike said, still blushing from earlier.
This should be "We’ll tell you soon but right now we need you to send a letter to Celestia." Fluttershy said.
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Sorry about that. Here are the rest of the corrections. The first run through had several errors, which made it slightly hard for me to be able to catch all of them. I feel downright terrible about not being able to catch all of them before now.
This should be "Well I...um...wouldn't hold...um...against her it has been a week since the wedding." Fluttershy said as quite as can be.
This should be "Oh you worry too much the egghead is probably just doing more of her studying." Rainbow said with an eye-roll after the word "studying" was said.
This should be "What in tarnaison happened here?" Applejack asked with wide eyes.
This should be "My word this place needs to be kept clean more often. Remind me to get Twilight to hire an exterminator when we find her."
This should be "Now that’s what I was waiting to hear."
This should be "Hold on partner we’ll have ya out as soon as possible."
This should be Applejack said as she Rainbow and Pinkie are tearing at the web.
This should be "He's unconscious but alive."
This should be Twilight said without even flinching at Rainbow's outburst.
This should be "Whatever you call yourself NOPONY ATTACKS MY FRIENDS AND GETS AWAY WITH IT!"
This should be Fluttershy then walked to Venom but stopped right in front of her. Fluttershy then closed her eyes and opened them back up revealing what all thought she would never have to use on another pony.
This should be when suddenly an orange blur whams into Venom sending her out the window where they all hear a loud thud.
This should be "Well I think it's too late to say that this whole room reminds me of a movie where radioactive waste is dumped and mutates spiders into Giant pony-eating spiders."
This should be Spike said as he sees everypony looking at him.
This should be Rarity said to herself as a tear could be seen, Applejack came to support her.