My little Venom: a monster inside

by Shadowheart332

chapter 4: friends or enemies (part 1) [edited]

time: 6:20
Back at Canterlot

Shining was arriving at Canterlot after the news about his sister. He could not help but feel he was responsible for what is happening.

As soon as he enters the throne room he sees all the others including Celestia.

"Alright what is this all about and what does it have to do with my sister?" Asked Shining in a calm but firm manner.

"Well Shining I called you here for a reason but you must keep yourself calm for what I'm about to tell you." Celestia said.

Shining Armor breathed in and out and prepared for the worst.

"I'm sure that you have been told of the legend of the symbiotes." stated Celestia.

"Yes, but wasn’t that just an old mare's tale?" Shining asked wondering what a myth has to do with this.

"Unfortunately that tale is as real as Discord." Celestia said.

Now Shining could almost know know what the bad news was as Celestia continued.

"It seems as though a symbiote has come to Equestria in search of a host and I fear that host is Twilight." stated Celestia

"M-my sister, we have to do something before she..." Shining said only to be cut off by Celestia.

"Falls victim to the symbiote. Yes I agree. Which is why I'm sending you and the Elements back to Ponyville to confront this Venom and free Twilight from the symbiote, and if you can, to capture the symbiote." said Celestia as she prepared the things that they would need for the battle to come.

"What about you, aren't you coming with us?” Rainbow asked.

"I will soon but as a last resort." Celestia said.

With that they all exit the throne room set on course for Ponyville

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Location: The ruins of Ponyville

Once they arrived they all soon noticed the damage done along with dark clouds.

"Wow Ponyville really let itself go." Rainbow stated.

"No it didn’t silly Ponyville is right here." said Pinkie, while everypony facehoofed or rolled their eyes.

"Twilight most have been searching for you all after your first encounter." Shining said looking around at the damages. Then they heard a voice behind them.

"well well we were about to think you had fled for your lives, glad we were wrong.” Twilight said in a dark tone.

"Twi you need to get a hold yourself this thing is making you do this. Just back down now and we won’t hurt you." Rainbow said as they all got in a defensive position.

"Oh but then it would not be any fun NOW WOULD IT!!" Twilight said as she shot a bolt of magic at Rainbow Dash.

"Ha ya messed." smirked Rainbow.

Then Twilight transformed into Venom and shifted from Unicorn to Pegasi and took off, slamming her head into Rainbow Dash who landed in a broken house.

Venom then let out a loud roar.

Applejack and Rarity charged at Venom who now landed.

to their surprise Venom shifted from Pegasi to Earth Pony and slammed her hooves on the ground creating an earthquake which hit both Applejack and Rarity.

Rainbow was back in action as she and Fluttershy tried to attack Venom.

Venom then shifted from Earth Pony to Unicorn. She then used her magic to grab Fluttershy in midair and swung her at Rainbow slamming both of them on the ground.

Venom then let a chuckle.

She turns to see a familiar face. "Well we did not expect to see you here." Venom said with a hiss.

"Twily remember who you are..." said Shining Armor only to be cut short by a bolt of magic

"NEVER CALL US THAT WE ARE VENOM!!" shouted Venom in anger.

Shining, trying to stand back up, turned his head to Pinkie and said "go get anything loud you have." Pinkie, not knowing what he was getting at with this, just shrugged and jumped all the way to Sugarcube Corner.

"I don't want to hurt you Twily, but I will if I must." said Shining as he got back up.

He then shot a beam of magical energy at Venom, who in turn did the same. As both beams hit each other, Venom soon finds that she becoming overpowered and is hit and sent flying as the beam continued to hit her and slammed into a building which then falls apart on top of her.

Panting, Shining and the four others approached the wrecked building.

Soon a rumble was heard as Venom jumped right out and lands in front of them. As Venom landed, they all got back in defense position.

"We must say we underestimated you Shining Armor, but we have one more trick up our sleeves." hissed Venom.

She then started anther transformation, as her horn grew longer and grew a pair of larger wings. When the transformation was complete, she was the size of Luna.

As she landed, she let an angrier roar, and thunder could be heard all around as it started to rain.

all froze in fear. Shining was the first to speak, "That's impossible."

With that Venom charged at them.

to be continued....

Author's Note:

this is were it all starts to come to a close. i wanted a big battle between venom and fluttershy, rarity, rainbow dash, applejack, and shining armor.
do know pinkie and celestia will join in the next chapter and play a more bigger role in defeating venom.
don't worry about spike he will return later. and feel free to adding any music if you wish.

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[GoldenFlower]

Were Doomed!!! Wut?

[King of Kings]

back at canterlot

This should be Back at Canterlot

shining was arriving to canterlot after the news about his sister.

This should be Shining was arriving at Canterlot after the news about his sister.

he could not help but feel he was responsible for what is happening.

This should be He could not help but feel he was responsible for what is happening.

as soon as he enters the throne room he sees all the others including celestia.

This should be As soon as he enters the throne room he sees all the others including Celestia.

"alright what is this all about and what does it have to do with my sister?" asked shining in calm but firm manner.

This should be "Alright what is this all about and what does it have to do with my sister?" Asked Shining in a calm but firm manner.

"will shining i called you here for a reason but you must keep yourself calm for what i'm about to tell you." said celestia.

This should be "Well Shining I called you here for a reason but you must keep yourself calm for what I'm about to tell you." Celestia said.

shining armor breaths in and out prepared for the worst.

This should be Shining Armor breathed in and out and prepared for the worst.

"i'm sure that you have been told of the legend of the symbiotes." stated celestia.

This should be "I'm sure that you have been told of the legend of the symbiotes." stated Celestia.

"yes, but was that just an old mare's tale?" asked shining wondering what a myth has to do with this.

This should be "Yes, but wasn’t that just an old mare's tale?" Shining asked wondering what a myth has to do with this.

"unfortunately that tale is as real as discord." said celestia.

This should be "Unfortunately that tale is as real as Discord." Celestia said.

now shining could almost now know what the bad news was as celestia continued.

This should be Now Shining could almost know know what the bad news was as Celestia continued.

"it seem as though a symbiote has come to equestria in search of a host and i fear that host is twilight." stated celestia

This should be "It seems as though a symbiote has come to Equestria in search of a host and I fear that host is Twilight." stated Celestia

"m-my sister, we have to do something before she..." said shining only to be cut off by celestia.

This should be "M-my sister, we have to do something before she..." Shining said only to be cut off by Celestia.

"falls victim to the symbiote. yes i agree. which is why i'm sending you and the elements back to ponyville to confront this venom and free twilight from the symbiote. and if you can capture the symbiote." said celetia as she prepared things they will need for the battle to come.

This should be "Falls victim to the symbiote. Yes I agree. Which is why I'm sending you and the Elements back to Ponyville to confront this Venom and free Twilight from the symbiote, and if you can, to capture the symbiote." said Celestia as she prepared the things that they would need for the battle to come.

"what about you aren't you coming with us.' asked rainbow.

This should be "What about you, aren't you coming with us?” Rainbow asked.

"i will soon but as a last resort." said celestia

This should be "I will soon but as a last resort." Celestia said.

with that they all exit the throne room set course for ponyville

This should be With that they all exit the throne room set on course for Ponyville

location: ponyville or whats still standing anyway

This should be Location: Ponyville or what’s still standing anyway (another way to put this is Location: The ruins of Ponyville)

once they arrive they all soon notice the damage done along with dark clouds.

This should be Once they arrived they all soon noticed the damage done along with dark clouds.

"wow ponyville really let its self go." stated rainbow

This should be "Wow Ponyville really let itself go." Rainbow stated.

"no it's not silly ponyville is right here." said pinkie, while everypony facehoofed or rolled there eyes.

This should be "No it's didn’t silly Ponyville is right here." said Pinkie, while everypony facehoofed or rolled their eyes.

"twilight most have been searching for you all after your first encounter." said shining looking around at the damages. when they hear a voice behind them

This should be "Twilight most have been searching for you all after your first encounter." Shining said looking around at the damages. Then they heard a voice behind them.

"will will we were about to think you had flied for your lives, glad we were wrong. said twilight in a dark tone.

This should be "well well we were about to think you had fled for your lives, glad we were wrong.” Twilight said in a dark tone.

"twi you need to get a hold your self this thing making you do this. just back down now and we wont hurt you." said rainbow as all got in a defense position.

This should be "Twi you need to get a hold yourself this thing is making you do this. Just back down now and we won’t hurt you." Rainbow said as they all got in a defensive position.

"oh but then it would not be any fun NOW WOULD IT!!" said twilight as she shot a bolt of magic at rainbow dash.

This should be "Oh but then it would not be any fun NOW WOULD IT!!" Twilight said as she shot a bolt of magic at Rainbow Dash.

"ha ya messed." smirked rainbow.

This should be "Ha ya messed." smirked Rainbow.

then twilight transformed into venom and shifted from unicorn to pagasi and took off slamming head on into rainbow dash who landed in a broken house. then twilight transformed into venom and shifted from unicorn to pagasi and took off slamming head on into rainbow dash who landed in a broken house.

This should be Then Twilight transformed into Venom and shifted from Unicorn to Pegasi and took off, slamming her head into Rainbow Dash who landed in a broken house.

venom then let out a loud roar.

This should be Venom then let out a loud roar.

applejack and rarity charged at venom who now landed.

This should be Applejack and Rarity charged at Venom who now landed.

to there surprise venom shifted from pagasi to earth pony and slammed her hooves on the ground creating an earthquake which hit both applejack and rarity.

This should be to their surprise Venom shifted from Pegasi to Earth Pony and slammed her hooves on the ground creating an earthquake which hit both Applejack and Rarity.

rainbow was back in action as she and fluttershy tried to attack venom.

This should be Rainbow was back in action as she and Fluttershy tried to attack Venom.

venom then shifted from earth pony to unicorn. she then used her magic to grab fluttershy in midair and swung her at rainbow slamming both on the ground.

This should be Venom then shifted from Earth Pony to Unicorn. She then used her magic to grab Fluttershy in midair and swung her at Rainbow slamming both of them on the ground.

venom then let a chuckle.

This should be

she turns to see a familer face. " will we did not expect to see you here." said venom with a hiss.

This should be She turns to see a familiar face. "Well we did not expect to see you here." Venom said with a hiss.

"twily remember who you are..." said shining armor ony to be cut short by a bolt of magic hitting him square in the chest.

This should be "Twily remember who you are..." said Shining Armor only to be cut short by a bolt of magic hitting him square in the chest.

"NEVER CALL US THAT WE ARE VENOM!!" shouted venom in anger.

This should be "NEVER CALL US THAT WE ARE VENOM!!" shouted Venom in anger.

shining trying to stand back up turn his head to pinkie and said " go get anything loud you have." pinkie not know what he was going at with this just shrugged and jumped all the way to sugercube corner.

This should be Shining, trying to stand back up, turned his head to Pinkie and said "go get anything loud you have." Pinkie, not knowing what he was getting at with this, just shrugged and jumped all the way to Sugarcube Corner.

"i don't want to hurt you twily, but i will if i must." said shining as he got back up.

This should be "I don't want to hurt you Twily, but I will if I must." said Shining as he got back up.

he then shot a beam of magical energy at venom, who in turn did the same.as both beams hit each other, venom soon finds that she becoming over powered and is hit and sent flying as the beam continued to hit her and slammed into a building which then falls apart on top of her.

This should be He then shot a beam of magical energy at Venom, who in turn did the same. As both beams hit each other, Venom soon finds that she becoming overpowered and is hit and sent flying as the beam continued to hit her and slammed into a building which then falls apart on top of her.

panting shining and the four others approach the wrecked building

This should be Panting, Shining and the four others approached the wrecked building.

soon a rumble was hear as venom jumped right out and lands in front of them, they all get back in defense position.

This should be Soon a rumble was heard as Venom jumped right out and lands in front of them. As Venom landed, they all got back in defense position.

"we must say we underestimated you shining armor, but we have one more trick up our sleeves." hissed venom

This should be "We must say we underestimated you Shining Armor, but we have one more trick up our sleeves." hissed Venom.

she then started anther transformation, as her horn grow longer and grow a pair of larger wings, to finish it she grow to the size of Luna.

This should be She then started anther transformation, as her horn grew longer and grew a pair of larger wings. When the transformation was complete, she was the size of Luna.

as she landed. she let an angrier roar. thunder could be heard all around as it started to rain.

This should be As she landed, she let an angrier roar, and thunder could be heard all around as it started to rain.

all froze in fear. shining was the first to speck, " that's impossible."

This should be all froze in fear. Shining was the first to speak, "That's impossible."

with that venom charged at them.

This should be With that Venom charged at them.

"Alright what is this all about and what does it have to do with my sister?" Asked Shining in a calm but firm manner.

This should be "Alright what is this all about and what does it have to do with my sister?" Shining asked in a calm but firm manner.

"well well we were about to think you had fled for your lives, glad we were wrong.” Twilight said in a dark tone.

This should be "Well well, we were about to think you had fled for your lives, glad we were wrong.” Twilight said in a dark tone.

to their surprise Venom shifted from Pegasi to Earth Pony and slammed her hooves on the ground creating an earthquake which hit both Applejack and Rarity.

This should be To their surprise Venom shifted from Pegasi to Earth Pony and slammed her hooves on the ground creating an earthquake which hit both Applejack and Rarity.