My little Venom: a monster inside

by Shadowheart332

chapter 3: the history of the Symboites [edited]

time: 2:32

after much talk with Spike about the whole Twilight and Venom thing. Spike finally sends a letter to Princess Celestia. soon enough they receive letter back telling them to get on a train to Canterlot as fast as possible.

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Location: Canterlot
time: 2:54

in the throne room Celestia can be seen pacing with worry. Luna, on the other hoof, was just as worried, but did not really show it.

"Is there anything I can do for you, Tia?" Luna said with a little worry in her voice.

"I'm afraid not my sister." Celestia stated, when they heard a guard approach with news.

"Your Highnesses they have arrived." stated the unicorn guard, while the five ponies and dragon came in right behind.

"good." Celestia said while turning to Luna. 'Sister I wish to speak to them alone." stated Celestia.

Luna just nods and walks out of the room.

"Now may be wondering what has happened to Twilight and what is making her act so aggressive towards others." said Celestia receiving nods from all of them.

“Well it seems a beast has returned to Equestria even though we had thought that it would not return for another million years." stated Celestia.

"But why did it choose now to return and why did it choose Twilight?" Rainbow asked.

"That is because the creature feeds off of anger and it must have sensed it in Twilight." Celestia said.

"It feeds off of anger eww." Rarity said with a shiver at the thought of it feeding on her.

"The creature bonds with a "host" which it needs to survive. But to the host it gives power and the creature makes the host want to kill any that think otherwise.” Celestia said.

"But what...um...is the name the creature?' Fluttershy asked.

"Well Fluttershy it is called a Symbiote as it was named when me and my sister first encountered it." Celestia said.

"Anyways ah think we should do something before that thing gets somepony injured." stated Applejack while the others nod in agreement.

"It’s not as easy as you think, for we were only able to defeat it last by using my sister's loud voice.” Celestia said.

“And why is that?” Rainbow asked.

"The Symbiote seems to hate loud noises.” Celestia said.

"I know the feeling." said Fluttershy looking at the ground.

"It also seems to hate fire." Celestia said.

“Well what are we waiting for let’s go find Twilight!" said Pinkie bouncing to the exit.

"Hold it. I'm going to send a message to Twilight's brother. He may want to know about this, and he may be able to help." said Celestia writing a message to Shining Armor.

"But what about Cadence and aren’t those two on a honeymoon?" Spike asked.

"Yes but I think Shining is more up to this task this his new wife, and because I think Cadence would only remind Twilight more of the "event"." said Celestia now preparing the massage to be sent.

"Spike if you please?" asked Celestia while Spike saluted, took the scroll and sends it on its way to Shining Armor.

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time: 4:32

"Hmm what’s this?" Shining said mostly to himself.

"What is it dear?" said Cadence with worry.

"It seems Celestia is in need of me, it says it has to do with my....sister."

to be continued

Author's Note:

this chapter i wanted to make history that celestia and Luna crossed with symboites. mostly to talk about what a symbiote can do and what there weakness are.
spolier alert: i do plain to have pinkie be the one save the day at the end

Comments

[King of Kings]

after much talk with spike about the whole twilight and venom thing.spike finally sends a letter to princess celestia. soon enough they receive letter back telling them to get on a train to canterlot as fast as possible.

This should be after much talk with Spike about the whole Twilight and Venom thing. Spike finally sends a letter to Princess Celestia. soon enough they receive letter back telling them to get on a train to Canterlot as fast as possible.

locution: canterlot

This should be Location: Canterlot

in the throne room celestia can be seen pacing with worry. Luna on the other hoof worried but did not really showed it.

This should be in the throne room Celestia can be seen pacing with worry. Luna, on the other hoof, was just as worried, but did not really show it.

"is there anything i can do for you Tia."

This should be "Is there anything I can do for you, Tia?"

[King of Kings]

"i'm afraid not my sister." celestia stated. when they heard a guard approach with news.

This should be "I'm afraid not my sister." Celestia stated, when they heard a guard approach with news.

"your highness they have arrived." stated the unicorn guard. while the five ponies and dragon come in right behind.

This should be "Your Highnesses they have arrived." stated the unicorn guard, while the five ponies and dragon came in right behind.

"good." celesia said while turning to Luna.' sister i wish to speck to them alone." stated celestia.

This should be "good." Celestia said while turning to Luna. 'Sister I wish to speak to them alone." stated Celestia.

[King of Kings]

"it seems Celestia is in need of me, it says it has to do with my....sister."

This should be "It seems Celestia is in need of me, it says it has to do with my....sister."

"what is it dear?" said Cadence with worry

This should be "What is it dear?" said Cadence with worry.

"hmm whats this?" Shining said mostly to him self

This should be "Hmm what’s this?" Shining said mostly to himself.

"Spike if you please?" asked Celestia while spike saluted, took the scroll and sends it on its way to Shining Armor.

This should be "Spike if you please?" asked Celestia while Spike saluted, took the scroll and sends it on its way to Shining Armor.

"yes but i think shining is more up to this task this his new wife, and because i think cadence would only remind Twilight more the "event"." said Celestia now preparing the massage to be sent.

This should be "Yes but I think Shining is more up to this task this his new wife, and because I think Cadence would only remind Twilight more of the "event"." said Celestia now preparing the massage to be sent.

"but what about Cadence and are those two on a honeymoon?" said Spike

This should be "But what about Cadence and aren’t those two on a honeymoon?" Spike asked.

" hold it. i'm going to send a message to Twilight's brother he may want both to know about this and to help." said Celestia writing a massage to Shining Armor.

This should be "Hold it. I'm going to send a message to Twilight's brother. He may want to know about this, and he may be able to help." said Celestia writing a message to Shining Armor.

'will what are we waiting for lets go find Twilight!." said Pinkie bouncing to the exit.

This should be “Well what are we waiting for let’s go find Twilight!" said Pinkie bouncing to the exit.

"it seems to also hate fire." said Celestia

This should be "It also seems to hate fire." Celestia said.

"i know the feeling." said Fluttershy looking at the ground.

This should be "I know the feeling." said Fluttershy looking at the ground.

"the Symbiote seems to hate loud noises. said Celestia.

This should be "The Symbiote seems to hate loud noises.” Celestia said.

and why is that? said Rainbow.

This should be “And why is that?” Rainbow asked.

"its not as easy as you think, for we where only able to defeat it last by using my sister's loud voice.' said Celestia

This should be "It’s not as easy as you think, for we were only able to defeat it last by using my sister's loud voice.” Celestia said.

"any way ah think we should do something before that thing gets somepony injured." stated Applejack while the others nod in agreement.

This should be "Anyways ah think we should do something before that thing gets somepony injured." stated Applejack while the others nod in agreement.

"will Fluttershy it is called a Symbiote as it was named when me and my sister first encountered it." said Celestia

This should be "Well Fluttershy it is called a Symbiote as it was named when me and my sister first encountered it." Celestia said.

"but what...um...is the name the creature?' asked Fluttershy

This should be "But what...um...is the name the creature?' Fluttershy asked.

"the creature bonds with a "host" which it needs to survive. but to the host it gets power and the creature makes the host want to kill any that think other wise. Celestia said

This should be "The creature bonds with a "host" which it needs to survive. But to the host it gives power and the creature makes the host want to kill any that think otherwise.” Celestia said.

"it feeds off of anger eww." said Rarity with shiver at the thought of it feeding on her.

This should be "It feeds off of anger eww." Rarity said with a shiver at the thought of it feeding on her.

"that is because the creature feeds off of anger and it must of sensed it in Twilight." said Celestia

This should be "That is because the creature feeds off of anger and it must have sensed it in Twilight." Celestia said.

"but why did it chose now to return and why did it chose Twilight?" said Rainbow.

This should be "But why did it choose now to return and why did it choose Twilight?" Rainbow asked.

'will it seems a beast has returned to Equestria even though we had thought that it would not return for another million years." stated Celestia

This should be “Well it seems a beast has returned to Equestria even though we had thought that it would not return for another million years." stated Celestia.

"now as you maybe wondering what has happened to Twilight and what is making her act soo aggressive to others." said Celestia receiving nods from all of them.

This should be "Now may be wondering what has happened to Twilight and what is making her act so aggressive towards others." said Celestia receiving nods from all of them.

after much talk with Spike about the whole Twilight and Venom thing. Spike finally sends a letter to Princess Celestia. soon enough they receive letter back telling them to get on a train to Canterlot as fast as possible.

This should be After much talk with Spike about the whole Twilight and Venom thing. Spike finally sends a letter to Princess Celestia. Soon enough they receive letter back telling them to get on a train to Canterlot as fast as possible.

in the throne room Celestia can be seen pacing with worry.

This should be In the throne room Celestia can be seen pacing with worry.

"good." Celestia said while turning to Luna. 'Sister I wish to speak to them alone." stated Celestia.

This should be "Good." Celestia said while turning to Luna. “Sister, I wish to speak to them alone." stated Celestia.

"Now may be wondering what has happened to Twilight and what is making her act so aggressive towards others." said Celestia receiving nods from all of them.

This should be "Now you may be wondering what has happened to Twilight and what is making her act so aggressive towards others." Celestia said, receiving nods from all of them.

"The creature bonds with a "host" which it needs to survive. But to the host it gives power and the creature makes the host want to kill any that think otherwise.” Celestia said.

This should be "The creature bonds with a ‘host’ which it needs to survive. But to the host it gives power and the creature makes the host want to kill any that think otherwise.” Celestia said.

"But what about Cadence and aren’t those two on a honeymoon?" Spike asked.

This should be "But what about Cadence? Aren’t those two on a honeymoon?" Spike asked.

"Yes but I think Shining is more up to this task this his new wife, and because I think Cadence would only remind Twilight more of the "event"." said Celestia now preparing the massage to be sent.

This should be "Yes but I think Shining is more up to this task than his new wife, and because I think Cadence would only remind Twilight more of the ‘event’." Celestia said, now preparing the message to be sent.
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