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lol ;D Celestia knows everything ;DD
i really thought that Twily would be in the kitchen cooking something but no ...she was gone
she seemed like a wonderful pony ;DDD
4505161 Yeah. She really was. I also miss her :(
I laughed before I even read it, all because of that cover image. That's a brilliant image.
This was nice. Short and catching. Although I do feel like the pacing was a bit off after she summoned Twily. They both certainly rushed things at that moment, but given the length and premise of this, I don't mind it. I don't think you really wanted to hammer out about five minutes of dialogue anyway until one of them would just say: "So, wanna screw?"
I think the explicit scene could have used just a little bit more explanation. Not much, but just a tiny bit. Then again, I'm rather nit-picky, so I obviously have to ask for more when it comes to that sort of scene.
I am rather sad that Twily disappeared though. But at the same time, I'm intrigued. Did she run away? Perhaps steal something? Or did she just vanish? Rather nice cliff-hanger questions, if you ever wanted to expand on this.
Which I actually want. This premise is always nice to see, and the way you set up the whole duplication spell thing is nice. Perhaps a power-crazy Twily going around and making Twilight's friends all bow to her or something. Aka, a whole lot of sex, which isn't bad at all. Again, this is just me, and I can understand it being a one-shot. I'd rather not demand a whole clop series of two Twilight's if you don't want to do it.
For the ending, and spoiler stuff, I thought it was a nice funny finish. Celestia certainly seems to know a lot, which leads me to believe that she might have used this spell before. Hint hint nudge nudge. I was actually thinking, and this ending might or might not be good compared to yours, but it would have been nice if when Celestia wrote back, it'd say something like: "Why did you send me the same letter twice?" What I'm implying of course, is that Twily would have sent her the exact same letter, perhaps hinting at something, the stuff I mentioned above about her running off or something. Damn, I really want this to be a series. But, I respect your decision.
In the end, I liked this, and you get a thumbs up.
4505202 Thank you very much for the kind words ^^ And, actually, this could probably turn out to be a good series, and I might actually turn it into one after reading your comment.
And, actually, I had been thinking about writing further, and she'd find Twily now in bed with Spike instead, but I found it rather weird, as Spike's still a baby dragon and all.
But, I might expand on it. Thank you a lot :D
Lol
4505212 i don't think it's weird to see twilight/spike fics
People always hear the words "baby dragon" and think pedophile or something
But what people forget is in the show spike is only a little younger than twilight maybe by only a year and since we don't know the exact age of any of the ponies it would be completely understandable for them to hook up
But thats just my personal opinion
Not saying your opinion is wrong i just have been wanting to say this for a while
4505519 Well, I think it's more than a year. Twilight was going to be one of Celestia's private student, so I think she was more than 1 l when she hatched Spike :)
4505616 Tomaydo Tomahhdo :P
4505719 Hehe, sorry ^^
4505616...
4505519...
Actually...you are both correct, in terms of canon information.
Lauren Faust and Meghan McCarthy have said in Tweets and interviews that the ages of the Main Characters were deliberately left un-specific. However, they have also stated the Main Characters are "close" in age to each other too, and have given general age categories for them...
1. Applejack and Rarity are the "eldest." (note "quotations")
2. Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash are the same age in the "middle."
3. Pinkie Pie and Twilight Sparkle are the "youngest" of the six Element friends. (the latter seeming more mature due to her prodigy nature, her role as leader of the Elements of Harmony, and now her rank as alicorn Princess of Friendship)
4. Spike (rather obviously) is the very youngest.
~ a. However, Spike and Twilight Sparkle are "close" in age because Twilight Sparkle applied to Celestia's School For Gifted Unicorns at a very early age when she hatched Spike through her uncontrolled magical surge during The Cutie Mark Chronicles (S01, Ep23).
~ b. On a separate note, it Princess Celestia who raised Spike (not Twilight Sparkle) until he was old enough (or more accurately, mature enough) to assist Twilight Sparkle.
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See the "trick" to the more general age categories, though..? It covers the widest range to appeal to an equally wide-ranged audience. And that, is genuinely clever marketing.
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So Reactor33 is correct that Spike & Twilight are separated by an age-gap of more than a single gear.
Likewise, Minequestria is correct that Spike is "only a little younger" than Twilight in terms of age-per-year.
4505212...
On a separate note, if you drew inspiration from your cover image, you really should properly credit and Source Link its source & artist: Dirty Mind, by DeviantArt(ist) Electronvolt.
4506289 Yeah, I wanted to, but I couldn't find the link. :/ But, thank you for it! :D
4506292...
Glad to help
. Giving proper credit where it is due is one of the major methods in gaining Respect, as much as giving it in return.
For future reference, 95% of pony fan-art used for fan-fictions are from DeviantArt. In this case, it was noted on the bottom-right corner of the image (thus easy to find).
Also hope my earlier post clarified things for you too.
Dont forget, when both Twi's were bucking AJ, they both had Maccum in them
4506332 Oh... yeah... I just pretend they used a spell to remove it. Otherwise Applejack just ate Mac's cum... no thanks xD
i.imgur.com/q7lARdd.jpg
That is all.
I actually expected you to add something new. And I like what you did with it, specifically the whole duplicate having stronger emotions than the real one. In fact the whole duplicate idea has a lot that could be done to expand it a d I would really like to see you expand a bit more on just how different the duplicate can be.
And spike just stared off in space
4510944 No, Spike was raped by Twily.
MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHAAHAHAA!
As long there's love with spik&twi
4511058 Well, if you read my earlier comments on the fic, you can see why I'm not going to put that into it ^^
Oh then how much rape?
4511070 Well, he's not actually getting raped, that's just something I said for fun. Though, I've been on the internet enough to know, it could happen xD
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INTERNET!!!
Oh god! Celestia's response had me cracking up!
Is this the end!?!
i love this if its a chapted but as a end?
4515912 Well, the thing is. I'm having trouble knowing how I should execute it, kind of like I said in the note. I felt so inspired with the other chapters, but once I got to chapter 4 and started writing, all my inspiration just blew. I have no idea how else I should end it. I'll think about it. And, if I come up with something good, I might write it down :)
I think you should have some of the crazyness/sexyness with the main6 and spike then celistisa steps in with all her bossness and be like "I RULE THE SUN!!" As the ending
4515958 Well, I might do something like that. I just need to know how I should make it. And, I think it would get kind of repetitive, if it's just sex with this and sex with that. In the end people would just get bored of it.
And, well, I'm not gonna do anything with Spike sex-wise. He's just gonna be a stupid little dragon ^^
To begin with, this fic was actually going to be a simple one-shot. As in, only one chapter. That being the first. So, as you might guess, it can get tough knowing how to execute it. :/
First I can under stand the hole to much sex but comidy needs drama even if it not sex just drama and crazyness is funny
Number two I can understand you think spike is stupid but i like him because I feel for him and the shit he deals with is unfair to him
Number three Is it a one-shot if its with your self?
4516019 Well, I don't mean one-shot like that. But, as in, I wanted it to be only a single short chapter.
And, I don't mean I think Spike's stupid like that. I just meant it as a joke. I just don't want to write anything sexual with Spike because he's simply a baby or a child for all we know. And, he's way too young, if you ask me. So, no. I also don't like filly clop. :/
And, yeah. I might do something more with it. I just need a little time to think about the final chapter ^^
Depend on you point of view on how dragons age if you think about it sike could have been in the egg for thousands of years and to be a full grown dragon when hacked and to hit the greed growth so soon and to be able to learn so fast and be the assistent to the most power full unicorn at a young age would be stupid if he was not meacher and to be called baby dragon only to standers of how long other dragons live... CRAP I SHOWED MY NERD!
4516085 Well, that's true. But, I think about it like this. Spike is maybe 10-12 years old. I don't count the many years he's been in the egg, I count how long he's been alive. We don't start counting one's age before they're born. Otherwise people's birthdays would be 9 months earlier than what they are now. And, that's just not how it works. :)
Ok true but when did twilight hack him and how old is she then?
4516109 Well, we saw she was about to get enrolled in the special school for gifted unicorns, or whatever. So, I'd guess she's about 10, kinda like how I see the CMC. I think the CMC are right about 13 by now. And, I see Twilight at the age of 20 or something. Thus, making Spike's age too young still. Because, that would mean Spike is only 10.
I obviously don't know this for sure, since there's no way to know their canon ages. But, this is what I guess they'd be.
Well if thats you ageing the i can see why
but to me twi seened like 6years old and a lot of people think twi raised spike but what kind of person would give a kid a baby no less a dragon to rase!
4516156 Well, it is kind of like a big sister taking care of her baby little brother, because remember, she still lived with her parents at that time, so, they were there to help out as well. :)
I feel like celi raised him to fill vode of her sister
4516175 Well, she might've. But, that doesn't change her age, none the less ^^
Well maybe not now but now that shes a alicore and he will be the only one to live close to her I think it would happen sooner or later
4516195 Maybe, maybe not. I think it kind of depends if she's willing to do it with a dragon. Which, to be honest, I doubt highly. Also, Lauren Faust already stated, that Twilight will not live any longer than she originally would. She just became an Alicorn, and that's about it.
She did say that but she said twis not a god not shed just live for longer and whats the differents betwen twi and celi now and how?
She did say that but she said twis not a god not shed just live for longer and whats the differents betwen twi and celi now and how?
4516233 Celestia was born an Alicorn, thus being more powerful and she lives for thousands of years. Ponies who were made Alicorns in their life as an ordinary unicorn, pegasus or earth pony, simply have a lot more power than usual, but their life-spans aren't any longer than before :)
At least, that's what Lauren said. So, I guess that's how it works. And, honestly, I prefer that theory ^^
Hmmmmmmmm ok but then if shes not amortal why did they give her the starting blocks for her empire?
4516279 Huh? I don't think I understand :/
They gave her a fliping castle of friend ship a.k.a the emipe of friendship
4516304 Well, that's true. But, it's still just Ponyville. And she still has a lot of years to live. And, for all I know, ponies live a lot longer than humans. At least, if you look at the info we've gotten on Granny Smith, she's right about 200 years old :p
Well i have to go and I had fun commenting and I,love your story so heres a gift
The ending was disappointing in a funny way. Huh.
~OreoKookie