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The Infinity Doctor


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What? No human this time?

Alright then time to get reading!

Hmm, not bad. I would like to see how this story continues.

~Emperor Archsage

Huh. Well, this is certainly a thing. I'm surprised an AI would even bother with such organic endeavors.

In any case, you've piqued my interest. Looking forward to more.

Let's hope the little AI doesn't make Octavia want to rip her own head off when it leaves for a new host. :rainbowderp:

Color me interested (it's light red, not pink, it's nothing like pink) I want to see where this goes. :rainbowwild:

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I'd say something witty in reply, but I'm just too tired...

Why do you have to keep writing so many cool things! My read later list cries for mercy.:fluttershbad:

You know, I was half-hoping for a Watchdogs crossover.

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>Crossover
>Me

I tried, twice. Didn't work out. And if you're looking for Character X in Equestria, you won't find it here. ....pleb....:trixieshiftleft:

This was pretty cool! It was like a superhero origin story.

Then sudden watch dogs references appear!
yes? no? maybe so? :fluttershbad:

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Mars?:rainbowhuh:
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A rapy AI with an extreme fetish for organic orgasms.:rainbowkiss:

I'm.. not sure what to make of this so far.

Body horror of something burrowing into your head through your ear followed by quick rubbing off? I think I have mental whiplash.

well that was a rollercoater of tone

Didn't expect a self decapitation ending up like this. I want more.:pinkiecrazy:

huh....
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well this was definitely different... :rainbowhuh:

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THOUGHT THIS WAS GONNA BE DARK AND EDGY!? FUCKIN 9edgy 7me!:pinkiecrazy:

made my way towards my home, lights flickering on as guards rushed towards the impact.

Missing an "I" there. - Otherwise I couldn't find any other glaring grammar errors.

You have my attention, although I wonder how you'll explain the AI's "interests."

Don't forget to masturbate!
That should be my motto.

You know you've read too much hie when normal clop seems weird.

It's skirting the mind control line to deadly serious but the semblance of control and humor has kept it from that.

Ah, cornilingus. The fastest way to a unicorn's loins is through her horn. Or something like that.

Rho seems a bit... unstable. I hope it can repair itself before Octavia starts suffering for it. Or at least alert her to the situation. :unsuresweetie:

Also, I do like this take on Lyra. She intrigues me, as has the fact that something like this has happened before.

Looking forward to more.

... Are you saying she has most of this site stuck in her head? A malfunctioning machine of lust and gay? ... I like it.

I've been playing a lot of KotOR lately, so the AI sounds like HK-47 in my head.
What the fuck have you done to me?

4521936 Oh Jesus Christ that comment made me read it in the same voice. I won't be able to hold in my giggles if Rho calls a pony 'meatbag'.

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Oh, I passed that stage decades ago. Oh those wacky Japanese art sites, so many laughs, so much nightmare fuel. :pinkiecrazy:

letting my wet hoof drag along my petals and across my button.

I don't know why, but this sounds like such a beautiful way to describe female masturbation.

Alright, the fact that the A.I. is altering her brain kind of disturbs me. And I'm the kind of guy who loves stories about possession, so that actually means something.

Pretty good! I've seen really bad authors take the wheel of good stories, but you seem to have it under control.

5818130 Thanks, I hope I can do it justice, this is the first 'mature' story I've ever done.

DF

Hmm... well, the A/N explains why I didn't recognize your name.

While there is some difference in tone from previous chapters it's not enough to jar you while rereading. Mainly it's because Rho seems more talkative and slightly less of a bastard.

All in all, I'm happy to see someone picking up this story, it's a fun one and you seem to be doing a fine job.

I do wonder how I missed this update when it actually was posted, I do keep a close watch on my Favs.

6519551 Thank you :) That's really weird the update didn't show up :rainbowhuh:

DF

6519668 *shrug* Found it now (while randomly checking everything tagged [Comedy] in my Favs), so it's aaaaall good. :pinkiehappy:

It probably just slipped between the cracks on one of those rare days where I don't check for updates.

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