Remember, the future starts, with YOU!
One-shot story to Chaotic Ink's 'The Witching Hour'
I am not a monster, I am not a pony- what I am is up to you to decide, reader, I'm not what I was, and probably never will be again. I hide in the shadows, and under cover of night to avoid them, and I intend to keep it that way...
This is a one-shot now a story!
Cover-art subject to change.
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I like it.
Granted I can't say what baring it will have on the original material, but I say keep the story going.
Two things I do want to point out is that Midnight's room is on the first floor while Squeaks' and Sapphire's is on the second, and Midnight has her own personal bathroom.
4185563 Yay! Thank you!
Poor Squeaks
Nice chapter!
Just something I think others will point out: How does Midnight know what a dream-eater is? Did Luna get back to her, did she read it in her Mythical Creatures book?
This has turned out to be a rather intriguing story, I find myself wanting to know more of Dreamscape and why she chose this particular family for her observation. Keep up the writing, I will see where this goes.
I liked it!
Word from experience: don't focus too much on the amount of words. I tried doing that my first few chapters and have been told they're a little rushed.
4228632 Thank you, for both your feedback and the advice
glad you enjoyed it.
*reads*
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random!
4302539 Not my best, I admit...
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*shrugs* it happens. If we could all turn out perfect chapters all the time, fan fiction as a whole would be a very different place.
it was still good. I know I said amount of words doesn't matter, but when you get below 500, it's usually to set up for the next chapter or wrap up the previous one.
hmm... I'm very interested in the direction you'll be taking my dear draconequus.
I shall be watching.
So... you're actually insane.
That's not what that means and you know it!
Middy's cookoo for Coco Puffs.
I hate both of you.
The plot thickens!
Midnight's rump isn't that big
I'm going to start keeping an "I hate you" jar
Well, I must say, I feel a bit bad for Dreamcast. What with the whole 'mistaken for a nightmare' thing, but whatever, can't wait to read the next chapter.
I'm lost now.
I like the new format you've got going here as well as more back story for Dreamcast.
you earned yourself a like, so far i like the history
Wait... what!?
Yeah, hold on a minute... *dials phone* ... *click* Yes, hi, you have something that belongs to us. If you return her, that'll be the end of it, but if you don't, we will look for you, we will find you, and we will cupcake you.
Cupcake?
New mafia code word. Keeps the po-po off our flanks
... just... no
You sure busted in there
yep
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Middy and Sapphy, sitting in a tree...
I. HATE. YOU.
Luna directly interfering in a dream? That's dangerous on so many levels
what happened to the ticker from the last chapter? That's kind of a big cliffhanger just to leave out.
4824209 That will be explained soon enough, sorry if it got confusing
4824370 kay.
Affections returned, and trust me when I say I'm trying my hardest to get the next chapter out.
Rainbow Dashed.......
I am sorry, but this pun was just too obvious (so I make it even more obvious)
Always one more step, and when one more step, and another one, and another. Always one more step.
7059940 Oh my god- I didn't even realize I'd made a pun
7060722 also 'scot-free' = 'without Scootaloo'