What you cant just end it there make it a three part series

I agree with him
please make a third

4647242 This second part was honestly stretching my creativity very thin. If I come up with enough material I will consider making another story. Of which one of three things could happen: I could write a prequel about Gizo, I could write more about Spike immediately following this story, or I could write about the aftermath +5 years. However currently I don't have enough story thought up for any of these three ideas.

Okay, read through 'Forging Plans' and I'm seeing the same problem as in it's predecessor. After mentally searching for a bit, I found the most descriptive term: it lacks the 'personal' touch. Such as in the chapter I read to, when the girls are making their way to the planning session, they just glaze over what happened with Spike. Given their history, they'd probably be more emotional than that. Even Rainbow Dash showed emotion when Spike tired to join the Dragon Migration.