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omniblitz


On a scale of one to potato I am a carrot.

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Her friends laughed and the six...

And the story goes to shit as the orphan with no familial connections beyond Twilight, and no close friends beyond the mane six, gets left out for the millionth time.

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the orphan

She's not an orphan. I don't know if you are just blind from your unfitting rage over a story that is successful, or that is just your natural eye sight. Oh well, I'm sure you can see no one agrees with you anyways (not counting on it though).

Author, you have a nice, simple story. It does carry several errors both grammatical and punctuation. Sorry that I cannot give this story a proper review, for I am too busy at this moment to do so. I'll put it in my library though for later.

From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha, Fort Impression On Everypony

5414077 Oh gosh, you can tell by the cursing, exclamation points, and caps in my previous comment that I am incredibly enraged by how successful this fic is. Look at those views! If I had a nickel for every view it's gotten, I could buy a can of pop at a vending machine.

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I take it you were too busy to read past the first clause of the only sentence I typed. Either that, or you believe Spike to be female.

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I thank you both for the comments however I would appreciate if you dont start an argument.

5414440 Quite. Apologies for taking up more than one space, but I'm not going to be spoken to like that on a public thread without defending my words at least once. What I meant by my initial comment was that your story is one of many stories that make me feel lousy because it brings up feelings of being unwanted and unimportant, and that the catalyst for those feelings is Spike, not Pinkie Pie; not a nice opinion, but being insulted for it was even more not nicererer. I hope Soto understands that the first half of his comment should have been PMed.

Now it was getting cold and Pinkie started to head back to her home to finish her night by the fire with a steaming mug of hot chocolate and her alligator gummy.

(6th paragraph from the bottom, "Gummy" needs to be capitalized. Just an FYI.)

Anyways, great story! The idea of Pinkie being the loneliest person in the party is a common theme in many Pinkie-related stories (not that it makes it any less true or impactful), but it was well executed in the setting of Hearth's Warming Eve.

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