This is terrible. I didn't say this earlier, and I should have. *takes deep breathe*
First comment, and the rest of this will be in my second comment of the chapter.

First, I noticed that you OP ed the mane 6 to the max. You tried to make a decent war fix, and you ruined it. This is my opinion, and I leave negative reviews instead of dislikes. The powers you have them, while awesome as fuck, took away as many feels as there could have been. Why did you give them that OP armor in the first place? They didn't technically need to fight at all. Twilight is an alicorn, and kicked serious ASS by herself when she had the power of all princesses. They should get off their lazy asses and end this right now. Also, about the armor, they kill people and get serious names from the enemies, making them not want to fight. That should have ended the war right there. Yet it stays.
Next, spike.
It,seems like he really doesn't need to be in the fic at all by this point. I like spike, really I do. Look at my favorites. Over ninety percent are spike based.
Sure, he has to fight a dragon, but can't fluttershy do it? She can just stare at him, and boom! New ally.
Several things, like raritys rape other things seemed unnecessary. She is one of the elements. If the guy had just killed her, maybe it would rend the ogre elements useless, and maybe their powers of death would ceace to,work. He was being a bigger idiot than everyone that worked on prototype 2. And he was a general? They don't let that SHIT happen, let alone indulge in it? Sure, dat plot, but he could have slit her throat. Before or after, really. She was an enemy. And why the hell was she not bounder something?

I like the story, but my comments are what is real.

Don't mean to hate.

4612772 Actually I really appreciate the feedback. To be honest it was starting to worry me that I was not getting any constructive criticism for my writing. I have said before and will say again I am actually a terrible writer, and honestly I never actually intended to write this story. This story is just a continuation of what I actually intended to write. So thank you.

4612936 Your welcome. And you're not as bad as you say. Writers tend to think they're terrible no matter how good they are. Trust me, I have no idea why my story, prototype: equestria has so many likes.

4612972 well I'm an engineering student meaning I write lab reports and things like that not stories, also if you could see my pre-edited stuff I'm quite sure you would agree with me.

4613074 Don't worry about it. Having an editor is a crucial part of writing.