I write for fun xX and rememger to smile :)
Surprise Birthday Party lives outside fo Eqestria in a place called Farmland where he' slived all his life. He decides to move away, and when he finds himself in Ponyvalle, he meets some friends and there's no way he'd ever want to go back. <3
it was edited by XSparkleShipperX who only did a quick run thru to fix an erorors. :))
if anybody want edit go for it dude
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Literary genius. Truly remarkable, like a new version of Mark Twain and Charles Dickens mixed into one person, then lightly sprinkled with a hint of Tolkien-esque fantasy lore used to create a real and believable fictional world.
4473797 dun even know lol but thnx
*drops some LSD*
4474508 oh ssoory that not siiposed to happen
Kevin is my favorite character. I hope Kevin comes back :C
4486174 Ohyeeah oulle have to weit and seweee!!!!!!!
I can't tell if you are a troll or a really bad writer/little kid XD
4944834 im 16
4962496 lol I doubt it XD
4962627 Yeag i am!!!!!!!! >:(
This is going straight in the Painful bookshelf. This is just... Wow. You're actually serious about this thing. I was hoping for otherwise.
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What. The. Fuck.
I can't believe how OOC all the characters are, how terrible the grammar is, and most of all... How you say you're 16, yet your writing is worse than a third grader.
I just read the entire thing.
And it makes me sick.
Edit: Okay, I was too harsh in my previous comments. The thing is, just thinking of how... Painful the story is just upsets me. It's the kind of writing that I thought a second grader would be submitting to their teacher, rather than a 16 year old submitting to a fanfiction site.
It's embarrasing to see such a butchering of the English language, and at an age where one should be much better.
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Have you read Sketti Go? It's much worse.
6238288 No, not yet. I'm not sure if I should risk the necessity of a lobotomy.
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I survived, so I'd give it a go.
You might want a little bit of cuteness first. It'll help clean out your eyes.
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6238307 I couldn't make it past the first paragraph.
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It's fine.
Wait, there were paragraphs?
The modern Fleming of our generation, this writer has provided to us fiction unparalleled in both the amateur and professional worlds.