While Apple jack is sick with pneumonia she ponders her life and her family's past while sitting under a apple tree.
((((*story was etited by EgoreFritzCud because IXSparkleShipperXI is sick thats wear i got the insperasion for this stry from :::(((( ***
CHeck out this Rage Review of my story and show your suport https://www.fimfiction.net/group/201778/rage-reviews/thread/194556/rage-review-staring-into-the-blue-of-apples
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Poor guy must be completely destroyed.
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Dat coverart.
best troll 2014
"Thanks Farttershy"
You never cease to amaze me!
The many names of Rainbow Dash:
Rainbow Yash
Raindow Bash
Rainfow Dash
Raingow Dash
The Saga Continues soon...
I really don't want to be that guy, but you might just want to consider running this through a more renowned editor. I shouldn't be one to speak, as I haven't completed my first piece yet, but even if you send it out to someone for simple spelling fixes, the story would be enhanced greatly.
Sorry if I'm being rude, or I'm completely missing the memo on something!
This story is so fucking future
3905971 My reaction exactly. Nien grammar!
Somehow I had missed this story I hadn't read it until just now when I read it do you think I enjoyed it (i enjoyed it if you guessed that it was right)
I can see they did a bang up job, already.
"staring into the blue of apples"
Apples are blue?