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Applejack is a well-mannered, down to earth mare. She values her family and friends, and loves to help others. But while she and Fluttershy are lost in the Everfree forest, she tells of her tragic back story, her worst memories and the reason she always wears her hat.

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keam

keam #1 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · ·

This. Was. God!

candybar379

candybar379 #2 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · ·

4114687 Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it!

Zytharros

Zytharros #3 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · ·

Wonderful story! A brilliant take on Applejack's past, and incorporating Best Ponies into the tale was genius. I was worried you had misused the Tragedy tag, but this is true tragedy. Well-done.

A couple things, though...

I was like the sweet tune of a song bird, but with a new touch, a gentle, motherly touch. It reminded Applejack of something, but just as she tried to reach back into her memories for whatever she had just thought of, Fluttershy's voice called her to reality

Fluttershy offered of course, but Applejack was a county girl with good manners and common sense.

country

The damage to the other buildings was less, but the barn was their home, not to mention the place they stored family heirlooms intrusted to them by generations past.

entrusted

Oops. Your editor missed a couple things.

I like how you write.

candybar379

candybar379 #4 · Mar 21st, 2014 · · ·

4114916 Thanks! Time for an edit

MrAskAPirate

MrAskAPirate #5 · Mar 22nd, 2014 · · ·

Apple family always gets me,
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keam

keam #6 · Mar 22nd, 2014 · · ·

4114702
Well, it is good! It have actually gotten 15 thumbs up since I read it last night, when it precisely had been published and didn't had single one!

StarKidney

StarKidney #7 · Mar 22nd, 2014 · · ·

I liked it hmm if only they made an episode about this

candybar379

candybar379 #8 · Mar 22nd, 2014 · 1 · ·

4116675 I've been approved by a pirate! My life is perfect

candybar379

candybar379 #9 · Mar 22nd, 2014 · · ·

4117004 I know! I'm so excited! I actually wrote this story sometime in December, but I was to lazy to get a fimfiction account till now

candybar379

candybar379 #10 · Mar 22nd, 2014 · · ·

4117015 That'd be awesome! But it's probably a bit to dark for a kids show

PatRoison

PatRoison #11 · Apr 13th, 2014 · · ·

Such a touching story. I really like how you describe the relationship between Applejack and Fluttershy. Both being nature lovers, it's easy for the two of them to talk. I also like to think that there is something about Fluttershy's innocence that allows others to be able to open up to her.

Nicely done.

candybar379

candybar379 #12 · Apr 16th, 2014 · · ·

4224944 Thanks! I wish Flutters and AJ got more screen time together in the show. Bats was nice, but I'd like to see an episode were they hang out together as friends, you know??

Meadow Feather