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Wow, it actually updated. Bravo.
5349638 Good to be back!
not sure if this has been stated before, but there are two Overlord stories with the exact same title, and those other two have pretty much the same picture.
5349646 Ya, with the new website setup the first two "related stories" are those two fics. I mainly don't use the armored overlord pic from the game because Don doesn't roll that way.
I might be getting some arts soon though ;)
I want to read this, but I'm curious as to how dark this actually gets.
5349690 Well there's some torture. Nothing on the levels of "intestines falling out" or anything like that but there's still some blood. A couple rather sad things will happen to certain ponies, things that the Overlord directly or indirectly causes. Overall, I wouldn't say it's close to the really dark stuff (i.e. Cupcakes) but there's definitely some there.
I'm glad it updated....but I don't really like where it is going. This just seems like some Mary Sue battle arena now. Normally that wouldn't bug me but I tend to prefer the villain in those situations. Personal preference aside, it's nice to see this story isn't dead.
5349905 Do know that crossovers won't be all that frequent. I only have one other in the works at the moment, and it won't be until much later in the story.
... Suddenly a Wild Mary Sue Appears! It uses Wreck story to look cool! It's super effective! Story plot now revolves around Mary Sue! (If you chuck in an overpowered Idiotic Saint Character who can do no wrong just to add conflict...)
5350906 I laughed so hard at this comment. Funniest thing said about Jason ever
Ya.
Really? A chapter Title that's a Spongebob reference?
5350906 Apparently somebody hasn't watch Ben 10, and frankly if you thought that all was stupid then you should look up the other aliens he could turn into...like you know an alien that practically is considered 'God'
Ok......This is probably my least favorite chapter, mostly because of this Jason character showing up, who turns out to be a damn Omnitrix wielding mary sue. I mean WTF, that fight between him vs. Don was so one sided. This is one of the reasons why I don't read displace story as much as I used to, because of cheap and OP characters like Jason that out performs the main displace villain character of the story!
*Sighs* But I digress, I'll keep reading the rest of the story.... I just hope this Jason character doesn't stick around in the story for too long.
Hey, I remember that crossover from the Jason story.
Ah heres where i stopped reading the last time. So much bullshittery
The War of Understanding is probably the most self-important pseudo-intellectual Gary/Mary s(t)u clusterfuck in the MLP fandom. I know this story was written before Displaced became infamous for shitty stories and shittier crossovers but you gave absolutely no sign that this was a displaced story anywhere up until this point.
So far this has been the greatest Overlord crossover on this site, yet this last stretch before this story's cancellation not only ruined my enjoyment, but completely ruined any sense of wander and empathy for ANY of the characters introduced.
This is why I can NEVER get into displaced. The constant crossovers and tone changes destroy a story for me, after all why care about the main conflict now that you've introduced us to a multiverse-spanning war where individual story arcs mean jack shit in the grand scheme of things.