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He made...her think...her baby sister is...
Using a child is sick. Okay? It's just sick. It is LOW.
even though some of us hate it (considering the havic it causes for updates) RL must come first
when ever you can update, I at least, will be here re-reading stories. up to the point of last update
Now THAT is how to be an evil overlord, The Princesses have no idea how screwed they are if he continues to be this smart about everything.
faking Apple Blooms death... NOW THAT IS EVIL!
i can't wait to see him get Spike to join team Evil
Five quatloos says that throwing away his bracer will come back to bite him in the ass. Hard.
And I'm wondering if Gnarl is able to corrupt AB before she calms down, or if Don is going to find her in a cage.
Don is best overlord, Praise the sun and the Overlord.
4602805 evil doesn't give a shit
Luna at the Gala. Seems like a real shame that wasn't in the series itself...
Okay, that thing with Applebloom was just low.
Honestly, this chapter was a bit jarring. I mean, sure the story has a gore and dark tag, but it hasn't used them yet. And quite a bit of time has passed since it started. It comes a bit unexptected to see the story suddenly take such a sudden dark turn. It would have fit better if the story would have had dark moments beforehand instead of starting with them so late. I remember a series of fics with a character Emerald Gleamer, or also called Oskar Osäkär (forgot how to write the last name). Anyway it is a crossover and this character is doing evil deeds right from the beginning but also surpressing some that he was thinking about like killing Twilight. With time he is changing seeing what he has done wrong and getting a better person. That is pretty much that made that story so interesting. I think this story could profit from such a line too. If evil deeds would have started earlier, this chapter wouldn't have been as jarring for example. Just as a critique.
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No he can't become good. Blood for the blood God. Skulls for the skullthrown
This is the kind of villainy I live to see in action.
Long-games of emotional manipulation and trust building make a villain all the more evil and in my opinion, infinitely more entertaining than just "me bad, me kill."
I wish more good fimfics had evil chessmaster villain type protagonist.