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Magics life

this is the life of my oc taking care of a daughter with a secret problem

thank you scythe and Midnight Wings for help writing this and oc usage

Chapters (6)

1 The Random Find · 28th May 2014 · 1,078 words
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2 Winters first kill · 7th Jun 2014 · 781 words
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3 Midnight wings · 31st Oct 2014 · 815 words
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4 The Winter Holidays · 24th Dec 2014 · 1,035 words
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5 Christmas Day · 25th Dec 2014 · 589 words
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6 First Day of School · 17th Feb 2015 · 1,534 words
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iloveportalz0r

iloveportalz0r #1 · Jun 7th, 2014 · 1 · · 2 Winters first kill ·

wot

MagicBlood

MagicBlood #2 · Jun 7th, 2014 · · · 2 Winters first kill ·

4508671 yes?

imagonerbyeeveryone

imagonerbyeeveryone #3 · Jun 8th, 2014 · 1 · · 2 Winters first kill ·

4508671

iloveportalz0r

iloveportalz0r #4 · Jun 8th, 2014 · · · 2 Winters first kill ·

4512990

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The Infinity Doctor

The Infinity Doctor #6 · Aug 25th, 2014 · · · 2 Winters first kill ·

Okay...so...I wouldn't say the story is bad, you just need an editor or a proofreader...I can't really think of anything else to say, other than 'good luck'.

MagicBlood

MagicBlood #7 · Aug 26th, 2014 · · · 2 Winters first kill ·

4904251 i got 2 proof readers XD and thanks

JerseyWest

JerseyWest #8 · Feb 21st, 2020 · · · 1 The Random Find ·

An OC story? Okay then, normally not to critical on these, depending on how much the author cares for critisum or just wants to write as an outlet ^^’ but you keep doing you regardless