This story is a sequel to Ten Months Later
After five years, he still works his over-watch job for Celestia. As well as some Black Ops mission here and there. During a "special" night mission, he hears a scream. Against Celestia's wishes, he abandons his main objective and goes to investigate the scream. What he finds will shock him.
(Revisiting the Person In Ponyland series. I had this idea while thinking about the series. Thought it would be a good idea. Based off of the good ending of Ten Months Later.)[UNDERGOING MASS EDITING. UNPUBLISHING CHAPTERS UNTIL EDITING IS DONE. WILL REPUBLISH AS THEY COMPLETED. SEE THIS FOR "DETAILS".]
Chapters (8)
OK the story is not bad, looks like it has some interesting possibilities.
There is however a couple of things.
One: Rouge is a color, Rogue is an outlaw sorry to yell but every one and his cousin gets them mixed up.
Two: unless he has built a Mosin Nagant pistol, 1895 I believe, putting a silencer on a revolver just doesn’t work well, too much gas escapes between the cylinder and the barrel. I blame Hollywood for this one.
Otherwise fine will follow and up vote.
4466667 Thank you! I knew I was spelling it wrong I just, for some reason, couldn't figure it out! I will fix the right away.
And yes, he has the Nagant model 1895 revolver. This is actually the fourth story in the series, he gets it in the first one. If you're interested, the series starts out here. Check it out if you haven't all ready.
(Fixed Spelling Errors)
Ah yes, very good, well thought out. Will read rest of story later.
hay continue it