Don't like my stories, that is fine, but if there is a reason, besides, not liking the storyline, please let me know so that I can improve
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Yeah! New one!
I like the way you write bro
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Thanks I am already working on the next chapter please stay tuned
You work fast :o
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Not really, I only work as fast as the inspiration I get lets me but still, I do try to work on the story as often as I can
Sure, it's not a factory!
And in fact you work faster than some writers I know. Procrastination is a widespread hobby for some people
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I only seem like I am writing fast is because at the moment I am very inspired for this particular story. I have several others that have gone now 4-5 months without an update due to lack of inspiration
I'll pray the Lord you'll never have a lack of inspiration for this one so
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lol Don't worry I have never, with the exception of once, abandoned a story, and even then I found someone to adopt said story to continue it. Sometimes I lose inspiration and that happens, but don't worry I'll eventually get back to it
I'm feeling reassured ^^
Wwwwooooooo new adventure
This is fantastic
Poor Fluttershy
New haircut
New game
New chapter
I'm so happy
FlutterLight?
Big Dash?
Gonna be interesting!
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Well you are half right
Surprise me
Hey, some reference to "The Chase", am I mistaking?
And don't worry for being late: quality is better than quantity! I sure enjoy your work, even if I don't understand why Luna's acting like that. I mean, it's kinda weird, no? XD
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someone caught it!
Also don't worry about not understanding as to why Luna is acting like that. It will be explained next chapter.
though on a slightly related note; I do believe they do have herd marriages, AKA practice polygamy, but there are some that do practice monogamy, AKA traditional marriage for us--which is funny, because if you really want to go traditional it is supposed to be polygamy which came first XD--and usually neither side truly understands the other
Oh my... I understand now! Silly Doubtful finally saw the link!
I like the way it's going (even if I didn't expected it in the first time XD)
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I always try to deliver, though honestly I could use some help deciding on if I should include the date or not...
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I think it can be very pleasant to see that. In my opinion, it seems to be an important part of the story, the beginning of a new herd (maybe? Suspense! )
Completely Rainbow
Hey, you see you didn't have to worry about this date! I find that you wrote it pretty good!
And, really, you start college at August in the USA? I mean, what a horrible moment to start college
4622902 fall semster
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Oh, just cultural differences x)
You feed me more and faster than I expected (even if I know this is temporary xD)
Interesting chapter. And the Gritu seem to grow stronger
I need to read these new three chapters but accountancy is taking up all my time! :,(
4635550 hey real life takes priority
4636653 real life sucks
4640560 that it does. Doesn't change anything though
I am finally up-to-date.
Ow yeah! Unexpected new chapter!
And so, TwiShyLestia? Maybe a love triangle?
Glad to see that you're not forgetting your good old readers, man. Keep continuing! ^^
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Maybe...
I would never forget my readers!
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Pleasant to hear
Good luck for your studies!
Great chapter here, in my opinion! Now, I'm gonna hold my breath until the next one's released!
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PS: God bless you for your studies!
I'm certainly enjoying the series so far. Good job on keeping the threads whole while weaving them about each other.
I do have one suggestion for you. When you change perspective in a conersation, don't repeat what was already said. It throws everything off when you do. I understand you are trying to backfill the thoughts and emotions... just do it as part of the continuing flow.
Keep up the good work, and good luck in college. I'm returning in September myself. :)
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I may try that. Anyway, thanks for the fav, and keep an eye out for the next chapter. It may surprise even me with its release date
So no one calls it First
Hey! That's my duty to say that!
Moonlit is not a great drinker, is he?
Good chapter. I hope they will find Cadence soon... Poor Shining.
God, the all relationship stuff is weird
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Why is this on hiatus?
6841806 I can't promise a lot of updates right now, I may have squeezed out the rest of the filler and made it into a real chapter, but I am still having some issue with writing a new chapter