The war is over, but now the new governments of the NLR and the SE must learn to live together in peace. However what caused the war is still laying in wait...
I'm certainly enjoying the series so far. Good job on keeping the threads whole while weaving them about each other.
I do have one suggestion for you. When you change perspective in a conersation, don't repeat what was already said. It throws everything off when you do. I understand you are trying to backfill the thoughts and emotions... just do it as part of the continuing flow.
Keep up the good work, and good luck in college. I'm returning in September myself. :)
Great chapter here, in my opinion! Now, I'm gonna hold my breath until the next one's released!
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PS: God bless you for your studies!
I'm certainly enjoying the series so far. Good job on keeping the threads whole while weaving them about each other.
I do have one suggestion for you. When you change perspective in a conersation, don't repeat what was already said. It throws everything off when you do. I understand you are trying to backfill the thoughts and emotions... just do it as part of the continuing flow.
Keep up the good work, and good luck in college. I'm returning in September myself. :)
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I may try that. Anyway, thanks for the fav, and keep an eye out for the next chapter. It may surprise even me with its release date