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Roxanne10


I love creepypastas and dark stories! Best Shippings are PinkieDash, FlutterCord, Fluffle Puff and Queen Chrysalis, and finally, Twilight and King Sombra! Best ponies are Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie!

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It might of been thousands of years ago, but Luna remembers it like it was just yesterday. The pain still stings like the day when she first found out, that very same day when she lost the only friend the truly understood her. And it was later that day she had became Nightmare Moon. Not from jealousy, but from sadness at her lost and anger at herself. That was the true reason how she had became the evil Nightmare Moon.

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Comments ( 19 )

Good story! Made me want to cry.:raritydespair:
Just one thing...
Plot gap: Where's the body?:duck:

Not Snowdrop! :fluttershysad:
Nice story!

Wait, it's not edited?
You did a great job! There were some places where you should of put a comma instead of a period. Like before you have a character talk. Besides that, you've improved since the first couple chapters on "Once A Crusader."

4447147 Thx.
:pinkiehappy:
And the reason why its not edited because I wanted to see what people would think if I wrote it by myself.

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She's not dead.:twilightsmile:
Oh Luna, always getting all worked-up over nothing.:facehoof:

I'm working on a story that builds off this little plot gap, just so you know.:twilightsmile:

4457873 YAY, CANT WAIT TO READ IT!!!!!

4458005
Get this, it all starts when Winter decides to go to Cloudsdale for reasons that you'll just have to wait and read.

4458005
Just posted it, and now I'm off to bed. I mean, it's 1:00 am, and on top of that, it's a school night! No wonder I have trouble concentrating during the last class of the day, but I consider my work here more important. Be sure to read it when it gets approved!

4458005
Once Upon A December is about to hit Teen rating! (The next chapter involves beheading Discord and running around with his head as a trophy

4487407 someone carrying discord's head like a trophy.

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Honestly, it was going to be a straight-up sequel, but it kinda just snow-balled from there.
Don't worry, Snowdrop will be the one to save the day in the end!

The little blInd pegasus

Nice.

4512618 No. The "i" in "blind" is capitalised.:ajbemused:

A link to PrinceOfTheNorth 's Once Upon A December for convenience since there doesn't otherwise seem to be a direct one... which the site should probably allow to be selected as a sequel despite the different authors. I strongly suspect they built it that well.

I assume you would NOT like spelling and grammar suggestions on this particular story?

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