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It has been a week since Sweet Belle has earned her cutie mark, and she's been hanging out with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. The reason why is because Sweetie thinks Apple Bloom and Scootaloo don't like her any more. And what will happen when she tries to get revenge.(Note) The dark tag is for the last chapter. And so is the teen-gore tag.
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Please show the tape recording.
Great story.
4057321 . The tape recording will be shown near the end of the story. So you'll just have to wait.
*Waiting song from Jeopardy"
4057343 hahaha. When I read your comment I couldn't stop laughing.
Thanks.
4057413 welcome.
Great start, can't wait to see more!
Nice story, I would have liked a bit more detail though.
Sweetie Belle changing her colours, and siding with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon? Gonna follow this.
4057413 I'm sorry but I'm think about not showing the tape recording. I can't really seem to find a place in the story to show it.
Could be an interesting story but I will wait to see the other part... Your writing skills sure had improved since the other story!
4058549 thanks.
I think that your idea of having it at the end is great. I want to private message you to avoid spoilers if you choose this storyline.
Slack? SLACK!?
NEVER!
This story has a cute concept!
It's a nice opening! 
I'll look forward to more chapters!
the code to break line is [hr] you can use to replace the _____ in case you were wondering. Not sure if you were just not aware of the code or just went for style, nothing more.
Oh, right. RRAAAHH!
An interesting story so far. Waiting patiently for more.
4067140 thanks, and the next chapter should be out sometime this weekend.
4059934 ummmmm, thank you? :
:
So...nasty...
Yay, still incomplete! That means more!
Good, good, good........
4156837 what's good
4157169 the goo
When in doubt... murder!!
4173582 so.. you think Diamond Tiara's going to murder the CMC. You don't know how wrong you are, or maybe your right. You never know. I'll tell you one thing, Diamond Tiara murders Silver Spoon, I'm working on the chapter as I write this massage.
4174305 Whoa whoa! *slowly backs off* that was a joke!
Don't care if she's sad. I hate Diamond Tiara.
YES! Diamond Tiara, you don't deserve your hair! You don't deserve to LIVE! Mua! ha! ha!
(sorry, kinda went overboard...)
4199270 I don't really know what Diamond Tiara is thinking. I hate her to. And the reason why I need help with the last chapter is because I can't write dark stuff. No matter how hard I try, I justcnt.
Thanks for the fav.
It's coming along nicely friends. Very nicely.
4209759 it most certainly is.
"I DON'T CARE!" Scootaloo yelled. "All of those thing could happen!"
What if I turned you into a cupcake?
4285644 NO, NO CUPCAKES.
4285710 *Starts laughing*
Another great chapter.
4352323 It wouldn't be here if it wasn't for you.
4352334 thanks
4352427 welcome
Woah, woah, woah!
What? Dude, this just got real!......Again!
Nice job you two. (Roxanne10 and Friendship is Magic)
But....this just bothered me.
Ehum. He? You mean the, right?
4354991 yea, sorry. And this chapter bothers me too. And im the writer. You will probably not see another dark story from me.(I made the little fillies monsters. WHAT KIND OF WRITER AM I?)
4355107
An awesome one that is.
4057328
Err. but you say it's complete.
4355176 it is complete. I don't really know what else can happen in the story. And thanks
4355193
Okay.
No problem.
Also, I see your point.
It does seem like a complete story. I couldn't think of anything else except maybe ponies finding out what happened to Diamond Tiara. But, that would probably led to some writing frustration.
4355208 I'm thinking about maybe writing a sequel to Once A Crusader, but I'm not sure yet.
4355225
Okay.
It escalated quickly, but I do enjoy the strangling part :-)