• Member Since 20th May, 2014
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Wolf Paw


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Big Mac had always had these powers, the power to shift. The power to change who he was in the blink of an eye.

Macintosh's parents always told him that he was special. That no other pony could do what he could do. That he had a gift that he could help many ponies with. But that power didn't help him when he needed it most, and now his parents were dead. Big Mac kept his powers a secret, and withdrew into himself, hardly speaking more than one word at a time. But silence can be as loud as screaming.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 14 )
JBL

Interesting start so far. Keeping an eye on this one.

Interesting! Can't wait to see how all this pan's out!!! Awaiting update, captain!!!

my eyes have been glued

I really like your premise. I also thoroughly enjoy your writing style. I hope that you will continue this story, especially as Big Mac is my favorite.

I've been lookingfor a story such as this for months now. The structure and tone are well made for the theme to develop. The choice of character is appropriate, given there is so little in cannon development. I'll add this to my watchlist, eager to read more.:eeyup:

It's so sad! And sooo good! I can't wait to read the next part!

JBL

Hurrah, it's alive!

Now we all just hope it isn't going to take just as long this time! :yay:

I'm so glad to see that your story isn't dead! This chapter, while short, is packed full of good detail and foreshadowing.

I know I'm not the only one who will be awaiting your next chapter with bated breath!

It lives! This is a story worthy of revival. Great premise and follow through. Glad the literary defibulator found its way hear to bring forth a beautiful Lazarus Taxon.

Please update soon:fluttercry:

A shame it hasn't been updated in such a while...

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Are you aware that the author has not bine online since 2015?

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