• Member Since 27th Dec, 2011
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Alkem


A brony who quickly writes whatever comes to mind, then posts it (sometimes not even proofreading) I really should consider not doing that.

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Since the beginning of time, ponydom has been forced to compete for survival.
This spirit of competition has reached a pinnacle in the relationship of two best friends.who battle against each other.

Why?

Glory for the winner.
Humiliation for the loser.

This is Lyra vs. Bon Bon

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 22 )

Kenny vs Spenny in pony form. My prayers have been answered. :fluttercry: (tears of joy)

Hilarious, couldnt keep myself from smiling, almost broke out laughing in class. keep it up!!!:pinkiehappy:

FUCK YEAH KENNY VS SPENNY! Man, and here I thought I was the only person on Earth who actually watched that show.
Just some friendly advice, be a little more mindful of your spelling and punctuation in the future. There were some errors in this, and it was a bit distracting. Beyond that, I look forward to more. :twilightsmile:

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Thanks. As always, I check and check and still miss stuff. The price I pay for writing when I'm sleepy. I'll double check (triple check? I lost count) to find and fix them.

And yeah, there will be more. Just gotta figure out what other competitions they should have. I don't really wanna copy from the show, then again they did do a lot of different things. But I've already got some stuff in my head.

A delightfully silly romp. I approve of this, even though I havent seen this Kenny vs Spenny, I still liked it a lot. Poor Bon Bon... can't wait to see what she'll cook up for Lyra next time. :derpytongue2:

This made me laugh!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:I'm so going to watch this story!!

I kept imagining a cupcake with two eyes and the word "soon" written on it. Hilarious.

You know, if there's one competition you SHOULD take from Kenny VS Spenny, it's who can stand the longest. I mean, you have Lyra as a character, so you're kinda obligated to. :derpytongue2:

And... I rather like the judgement passed, there. Good work again!

I suck at thinking up challenging situations so I commend you for this series of events.
Wait a second the emoticons gave me an idea!
Why not see who go the longest with their eyes like Derpy?:derpyderp1:

Damn it! :flutterrage:

Couldn't make it in time. It was still 11:58 on my clock. Damn website time.

In my attempt to beat the clock I made this in a rush and it's sloppy. I work on fixing it but probably later. The fact that I didn't make it in time has got me down.
:pinkiesad2:

Edit:
Fixed it up. There may be tiny errors I've overlooked but the big ones are taken care of.
Still kinda down for not making my self imposed deadline though.

Aww. :twilightsmile: Lyra, how much money did you spend today?! :twilightoops:

lol Lyra's invincible bank account.

I love these little antics between these two. MOAR :pinkiecrazy:

Aw, I was hoping it would really capture the essence of Kenny Vs. Spenny (Bon Bon being neurotic and paranoid, Lyra being immature and a cheater, lots of swearing and obscenity), but I see it's rated 'Everyone'.

I read the first chapter, and it was alright.

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Thing is despite that this is a K vs. S type fic, I just can't see the two swearing. I can't get over that they're sweet little ponies... Fuck that!

You're right I need to up the ante here. I'm almost forgetting the point of this. Lyra is supposed to be a overconfident immature unicorn who won't hesitate to cheat to win. And Bon Bon is supposed to be the supposedly straight laced earth pony but, with Lyra's antics driving her nuts, becomes paranoid to the point she does something just as crazy (or stupid) or more then Lyra would do.

After all these character haven't really been established a personality on the actual show.

1133758 Oh, and Lyra has to constantly insult Bon Bon's mother.

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And constantly insinuate that Bon Bon has a deep seeded crush on her of course.

okay I CALL SHANANAGANS bonbon should get called out on that one, thats going way to far.:flutterrage::twilightangry2:

"Point is I one!"

Bit of a typo here...

Lyra leaned in again. "Come on, let me have a peek?"
"No!" She answered, sliding away again.
Lyra now rested her head atop Bon bon's fluffy, dark blue and pink mane. "Just a peek?"
"No!"
"I'll let you see mine."
"Noooo!"
It's almost too easy..........
Also I'm not sure Rarity would react so, calmly to Bin Bons dress. She would most likely just keel over being there no other option as dramatic as such. Well maybe a few but none I have the patience to type.:raritydespair::fluttershysad::pinkiesick: LOVR THIS FIC SO FAR DOE:yay:

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