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Alkem


A brony who quickly writes whatever comes to mind, then posts it (sometimes not even proofreading) I really should consider not doing that.

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Bowser's latest scheme to conquer the Mushroom Kingdom winds up sending him and his army into Equestria by mistake. Upon failing to conquer what he thought was Princess Peach's castle, he accidentally sets free a strange looking creature encased in stone.

What unfurls is an unusual adventure between the unlikely duo of a pony and koopa, out on a quest to save Equestria and all their friends from the grip of chaos.

Will Pinkie Pie save the day? Will Bowser come out on top this time? Will He be able to put up with Pinkie's over the top, hyperactive antics? Will She get through to the grouchy Bowser and make a new friend? You'll just have to find out for yourself.

This tale is super. It's bizarre. It's Bowser and Pinkie's Super Bizarre Saga!

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 120 )

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Not too shabby...let's see where this goes.

http://youtu.be/G5IH8xgv1LY

that is all.
Wow, that came out very spammish. Oh well. *Shrugs*

So how did Discord take over the ENTIRE army? Last I checked he had to do it individual by individual.
Won't vote for now. Will wait to make judgement.

Please continue, the BowserPie team should provide some humorous moments. :pinkiesmile:

Now this is going to be good. :pinkiehappy:


I hope for combo team-up attacks between Browser and Pinkie as the storyline continues on.:rainbowdetermined2:

Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one.

Even better if Pinkie Pie took on the minions like Mario, stomping on their heads. She needs a hammer, too. You deserve a :rainbowkiss:.

Question! Are you only going to include Bowser's generals from Paper Mario or will you include other games like Galaxy?

Okay, this is epic. :pinkiehappy: I love the the way you portray the characters. A part of me hopes the worlds can stay connected so they can drop by and visit. (That would also lead to some good sequels.)
Also, Discord. BRILLIANT!:scootangel: That's the Discord I know and adore. (I do hope that he isn't turned to stone again. That's just cruel.)

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Thing is, the bosses from Paper Mario really stood out to me. They had personality and I remember the fights against them being epic. As for Galaxy and so forth they really didn't stand out so much. (Hell, there were two versions of almost each boss if I remember correctly.)
I won't really add the Koopalings because they were all pretty generic in my opinions. Plus hard to explain story wise.

Though if anyone has suggestions for Mario villains to add in, I'm all ears. There are plenty there, and yes there will be more then just the ones from Paper Mario, but the generals will hold a pivotal role later on.

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Glad you enjoy it.

As for leaving it open ended, I never really thought of that. I could do that. That way, I can always do a follow up when I get the idea to.

This is some great tale coming from you. I have to ask though, will there be any combo team attacks coming from our two "heroes" in future chapters ?:pinkiehappy:

Please do keep up the good work as this is going to be a bit funnier as adventerous as this tale of yours continues one. :ajsmug:

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Short answer: yes.

Slightly longer answer: A lot more. Pinkie Pie hasn't even gotten a chance to stock up on supplies back home yet. But when she does... :pinkiehappy:

Where does she get those wonderful toys?

Hmm, more mario villians? What about Lord Fawful?

Ether have Discord just having fun whit the landscape or they are in Shyguy toybox.

And when I read team attack I thout of the Mario & Luigi triologi games. But when Thut about that blue thing and the patch it had I know what it was. You are taking it in style of a Paper Mario. To be exact this first boss end this new area is in Paper Mario 1

If only this was a video game :fluttercry:

I really like the combination of Mario & Luigi gameplay while using the main concept of Paper Mario.

You should have The Mane 6 (Not counting Pinkie) be Discorded and have them battle Pinkie and Bowser to make things more interesting.

And for Bosses other than the Paper Mario villains.......Wart, the team up of the Axem Rangers and the Koopa Ninja Brothers, Smithy, Shroom Queen, King Boo, Cackletta, Fawful, Popple.
I'm hoping these might help you with boss ideas.

Wait a minute....... HOLY CRAP GENERAL GUY'S NEXT!!! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH NOW! HE'S MY FAVORITE BOSS IN PAPER MARIO!!

You have an encore going here! It's been two weeks. Give these people some Pinkie and Bowser!

Nice, now I wonder how the remaining elements will control parts of Bowser's Army :pinkiehappy:

Fluttershy, a general...YOU ARE SO AWESOME!:rainbowkiss:
I can't wait to see more of her and the General Guy in the future.

Commander Shy..General Guy...

Take out the titles and what do you have?

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In all honesty, that turned out to be a clever little coincidence.
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I'm not that clever.

I really like how this story is turning out. You're doing a really good job with the storyline. :pinkiehappy:
I like how you added a new Combo Move, and I can't wait to see more of them and the General-Element pairings! :twilightsmile:

I love this. The Bowser and Pinkie Pie chemistry is fantastic.
So does this mean Bowser will have minion based attacks as well?

Come on, give Pinkie a hammer already :pinkiehappy:

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What, you expect me to just have Pinkie pull out object out of nowhere? For her to have stashed hammer around the forest in case of hammer emergencies? That she pull a mallet that's bigger then her out of her mane? Fall out of the sky?

That's not how things work for Pinkie.
*Gets pulled to the side and whispered to*

Ahem, It appears I was mistaken and that's exactly how things work for Pinkie Pie. I retract my previous statement.
As for the hammer bit. Isn't Pinkie Pie enough of a force of destruction on her own! Can you not see the chaos that will be unleashed if I give her a hammer. Especially when more combo attacks are revealed? Exactly! I've seen the insanity, and let me tell you something...

It's glorious. :pinkiehappy:

Then allow us also to see this demented rapture, and give Pinkie a hammer :twilightsmile:

Is it normal I imagined most of the scenes in this story as cutscenes and battles done in the graphical style of Mario and Luigi: Bowser's inside story?
And addition to that is it normal that it makes me want to play a game like the said imaginings?
P.S. Loving the story.

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:pinkiegasp: Okay! Sorry been held up and also kinda started up some other stories. But yes, right now I'm working on the next chapter.

Btw guys, keep dropping Mario villain names, need to think up more to put into this.

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It's perfectly normal. In fact if I had the slightest hint of artistic ability I would make some drawings to go along with the story. I would even make this story into a game. But alas, I lack that skill.

494912 If you wanted to make this into a game, I could program it, possibly. Couldn't do any art, though. Oh, but if you don't want me to, that's OK too. I'd be slow as all hell after a couple days, anyways.


...programming a turn-based battle.....make a note of that...

Awesome chapter again. The Fluttershy-guy army was funny.

The cuteness! :fluttershysad:HNNNG!!

-falls over-

three minutes later
I'm fine. Now where was I? Oh yeah! It would funny if Rock Hawk made an appearance or any of the three tail siblings: Hook tail, Dark(?) tail, and Bone tail.

Pretty good (Please have the Bomb-omb king be with rarity PLEASE!!)

Awesome. Pinkie has learned summon spells. By the way, out of curiosity, any possibility for Fuzzies to appear?

I can see this story being a game :pinkiehappy:

Too bad that most likly will never happen, but it's still fun to imagine at times throughtout the story :pinkiesad2:

Flutter Guys = best minions ever! I can just picture their yellow robes, happy masks, and even though you didn't do this I also imagine them having pink wigs :rainbowlaugh: This captures the tone and humor of the Paper Mario/Mario RPG games perfectly! And if we're naming Mario enemies...You gotta have some Boos at some point! Tutankoopa's another good choice! But a really good choice in my opinion would be the Koopa Brothers due to how hilariously lame they can be :rainbowlaugh: Keep it going!

537051 nah Rarity and Crystal King thats a good combination. Or maybe even Spike with Crystal King.

537747 Yeah the Koopa Bros with Rainbow Dash. :rainbowdetermined2:

536974 Gloomtail is the name you're looking for. Though weren't they in Thousand Year Door and not part of Bowser's army?
537865 Second suggestion? Yes. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png

Is Trixie going to be in this story?

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F--king Fuzzies! :flutterrage:
Those guys always gave me trouble. Thanks for reminding me.

I should mention I've already picked out which Mario villains will be paired up with ponies. I'm now picking out others to be sort of mini bosses to impede their journey. And picking existing characters who weren't given much development to be a stand in for other.
(Anyone happen to see that with the Diamond Dogs? No?... Sigh. Guess I needed to expand a little bit more on that one. But they will be back so I guess I will get another chance.)

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I'm trying to figure a way to bring out other characters through the story without just pulling them out of nowhere. Though if I can't help it, then I will.
Mentioning the three dragons from Thousand Year Door, I don't think I really need to bring them in. After all, aren't their dragons in Equestria already?

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Stop guessing. You're starting to get some of them right. :pinkiehappy:

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This is exactly why I'm thinking of mini bosses. I want to bring out more fun combinations. Plus it's just fun bring back all these old characters of the past.

One question before I disappear to work on my next fic, I've seen some authors place music links along with their story to give it more ambiance. I was thinking of doing that for the fight parts of the story.
Let me know what you think.

Oh, that Pinkie and her shenanigans :pinkiehappy:

I say yes to the music links. it's a nice and relatively non-obtrusive thing. and... with pinkie being pinkie... it makes sense that it can be heard in the story.
could even have it as a record player off to the side from nowhere.

Did Trixie say "I"? (looks up on the page) Yes she did.
This was the error I found.
Her smile was contagious, as it spread to Kamek. "There, now we can go to the next step. Mater Bowser, you still remember how to use magic right?" He, along with Pinkie, turned their head over to the large Koopa who remained silent. "You still remember how to use magic, don't you sire?"

Damn, with all of the music and SFX links I can start to imagine this as an actual game.... dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png

I WANT THAT GAME. :twilightangry2:

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