Tirek felt a "present" was in order for his brother. Sinuba The Jackal was released from her cell. While Tirek's own confrontation took place, a fierce battle ensued between Sinuba and Scorpan. With the creature subdued, Scorpan decides he is tired of running.
Not a single comment? Really? I don´t get you, people.
This piece was not beautiful, but alluring. What a fantastic read!
This is my favorite kind of narration; ambiguous, rich with metaphors and meticulous descriptions. Scorpan´s POV is an excellent perspective to tell and story; I´ve know it by first hand
The plot was fantastic, although I feel that Maud didn´t really have many reasons to be here, but it´s your story. The end seemed kinda rushed, but I still liked it. Anyway; great job!
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I'm glad you enjoyed the story. In regards to Maud's appearance, I like to add in continuity between the stories I've written. Her being there is a reference to her role that I wrote about in the story Duty. About the only time I will go against continuity is when I need a fresh story with a fresh start.