• Member Since 29th Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 14th, 2014

Nevermore


I got into FiM last October. I thoroughly enjoy them all. My favorites are Applejack and Twilight. I don't like Rainbow, and extremely dislike Pinkie pie.

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Warlike pegasi from the ponies native land are invading Equestria! They have already taken Fillydelphia and are using it as a base of operations. Princess Celestia, being the goddess of Equestria, has mastered the earth pony flight spell. She grants Applebloom wings for a short time. She and Scootaloo must disguise themselves as young invaders, and learn what they can before getting caught!


Found this pic on the internet, and whoever did it is a genius and thanks for letting me use it!

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Comments ( 12 )

Indeed. I can help you proof read it if you want. Good Job so far.:ajbemused:

Thanks! I'm sad that I don't have a cover image yet, but I'll get it soon!:ajsmug:

Rockin' dude...:ajsmug: cant wait for more.
There were a couple grammatical errors though, nothing major just things like
double periods and such.

Do you need a proofreader, cause I could probably help with that.

anyway, good beginning keep it up bro /)*(\

good job man. i can't wait to see what happens in the later chapters:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

hrmmm... i say nevermore that i need to give thee more moustache :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:
dost thou think that it is enough moustache?:pinkiehappy:

You need to check your spelling more carefully. I see quite a few errors.

Yeah sorry about that. When I posted it, I realized that I hadn't edited it yet. But it's all revised and stuff so now it's fixed!:pinkiehappy:

Pretty good so far. a few grammatical mistakes. But, all in all great job!

This chapter has been successfully re- edited, to make it more mind- pleasing.

This chapter has been successfully re edited.

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Thanks!:pinkiehappy: and if you have anything to help me make this the best it can be, please say so!

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