Don't be a stranger now. I won't bite.
Applejack and Pinkie Pie team up to create the most epic Halloween party Ponyville has ever seen. Together they transform Sweet Apple Acres into the spookiest place around, complete with games, a costume party, and a haunted hay ride. But when weird things start happening, it all falls on the mane six who must face their fears to discover the truth. Is it some elaborate prank, or is it the fabled Spirit of the Hallowvale?
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Please. Don't deny yourself this song. It fits absolutely PERFECTLY in my mind. ;D
Liking the story so far!
ooooh delicious mystery, but,in all fairness, that had trixie written all over it, brilliant none the less
When they were getting ready to go investigate, I was hoping you were going to make a joke about "would you do it for a Fluttershy snack?" but it's still good without that.
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If I was going to reference Scooby Doo, I was going to do a "I would've gotten away with it too, if it wern't for you meddling ponies - and your dragon!" But I decided against it. lol
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You're the first to say that actually, most people tell me it wasn't obviously until a little into chapter five. That makes you more aware then most. Bravo :P
Definitely wouldn't have been surprised at a "Let's split up, gang!"
Also, that was some good misdirection, I almost forgot about the 'swumfing in da grass'.
Well I liked this story, it was pretty cute and I appreciate its lighthearted style. There were some typos, a few too many to ignore, but it was a fun read.
246170 I didn't have a proof reader for this story, and it wasn't one I put my usual effort into. But I'm glad you enjoyed
Oh wow, that was a spooky ending!
This was great, I wish it had more viewers!
I love it
A new review for an old story; when I originally read and reviewed this story I didn't think too highly of it, sure I liked it back then but I focused too much on the few minor typos to truly appreciate it, now after having just (a few days ago on Halloween) re-read it I feel like it was much better than I had though.
The story is very in character feeling and pulls off being both cute and, slightly, scary very well. I really like 'everyone' rated horror stories and this one is pretty endearing, I guess it just took a few years for that to sink in.
I can't give the story another 'like' and it’s not quite good enough for a favorite so, if nothing else, this review will have to do.