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Yoru no Seishin


Group of Alternians with nothing better to do. (We're collectively a group. I'm the only one who posts anything.)

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How to get Smashed in four easy steps.
1. Make a deal with a god and receive an artifact of power. Check
2. Acquire new look, sweet powers, and sick loot. Check
3. Piss off the ruling body of the country. Check
4. Profit. Still working on that.

Inspired by the LoHAV fics

Rated T for swearing, innuendo, and definite violence

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 63 )

top kek.
Greninja fic.
>amsofuckinghardrightnow.

Hmmm i think i look after the next chapter too.

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Too much time on 4chan?

Wait was greninja able to break the fourth wall and talk to the narrator, the narrator a spirit, just a voice in greninjas head that likes to narrate, or.... The voice in greninjas head is the narrator.
<insert inception> *bwaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh*

So, since this is a Smash Bros fic I'm assuming he won't be the only human there.

I had an idea like this, but with Deoxys instead of Greninja.
Like, with Celestia obliterating him like Rayquaza obliterated the one Deoxys in the 7th movie. And then he comes back for payback.

Ill keep a tab on this to see where this leads to.

Interesting. I like the way you got him to equestria. Usually it's "X buys perfect prop needed for costume that some suspicious shop owner just happens to have." As someone who is eagerly waiting for Smash Bro's WiiU to come out, I can easily see why Issac wanted to play it. Plus, up until the bit with the monocle, I imagine the stand would have looked legit. Though the casual breaking of the forth wall is a little off putting. I've seen it done a few times in movies and literature when the character is commenting to or talking to the audience. I'm not saying it's a bad idea, just something that shouldn't occur too often. It also shouldn't be used as a way to move the plot along by instantly informing characters of things that they have no right knowing.

No costume. I approve! It's about time more stories went in that direction.

...Eh. I'll watch, but I'll not fave till you come up with a new movement/style/direction. This seems...cliché in the portent of LoHAV. The only real difference is a lack of cosplay...but your character still ends up in a different (fan) body in Equestria. You do realize there is already an Espurr fic, correct?

4333326 Exactly, every single story i've seen written like this always happens with "X buys magical artifact from convention"

Thumbs up and fav! All I needed to hear was Smash Bros.:pinkiehappy:

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Look at the side bar for this story's short description. That's where the cosplay is.

I don't see what's interesting about these fics.

Even if the character chosen was one that I was a fan of, it still wouldn't interest me, as it wouldn't even be the same character!

Instead, we have a random guy that has been given the same powers and looks, because of reasons.

Having to pick between the original character that every fan would want to read about, or a dude transformed into your favorite character...

... I just don't understand what's the appeal of the latter, except maybe for some people with weird fantasies.

4335297 Ah...so there's still cosplay involved...

4336566 Yeah, but the characters so often introduced in crossovers are crap. Their speech habits aren't accurate, their characterizations about as worthwhile to read as the contents on the back of a soda bottle, and overall most crossovers aren't interesting.

I found a nifty LoZ Twilight Princess crossover called 'Courage', but stories as good as that are rare. You have to be extremely careful when writing crossovers, after all.

Greninja's here to kick some ass!!

don´t mind them, i would like to read another chapter:twilightsmile:, it is just the first one, maybe it get even good enough for the other guys.:trixieshiftright:

Slightly Gary Stu-ish, but it's not that bad. Pacing's a bit fast, but at least it's not: This happened, then this happened. Oh look, next day and this happened as well.

Overall, I'm enjoying the story. Here's hoping you can continue this with possibly more frequent updates. Also, my guess is that you're going to wait until the actual Smash Bros game comes out before revealing his smash.

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Its already been revealed. Pretty brutal too.....

Wait, ponies have types? Well, got admit, thats new... Lets see here, from what I understand* these are the typings:
Celestia- Fire/Psychic
Twilight- Psychic
Applejack- Ground/Fighting
Rainbow Dash- Flying/(Fighting?)
Pinkie Pie- Ground/(Fairy maybe? It makes sense)
Fluttershy- Flying/(Fairy?)
Rarity- Psychic
Luna- Dark/Psychic? Maybe Ghost/Psychic...
Well, what they are is up to you, just trying to be helpful

4545046 Well maybe some of us don't like researching games and would rather go in blind? Ever think of that?:trixieshiftright:

Well, I have now confirmed my suspicions of here ninja being a troll, because he showed quite clear evidence of being one this chapter:trollestia:

Welp, this just got funny as hell.

Wait, did rarity fall over from pure disgust of being licked? Or did greninja use the move lick and paralyzed her?

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Rarity is definitely going to need a cheri berry after this.

well i found the fanfic again readed it and not bad actually, i would read more if there is more soon. It is good eough i think.

I'd listen to the person who sounds like they actually know french. I'm still giggling from the "Holy Shit" that ended that line.

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Thank you for the proper wording.
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OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHH! new hidden civilization time!

Well, this got interesting

Wait, in the previous character Greninja can only speak his name. I guess Fluttershy can understand him because of her special talent...

Hello, good sir! I, too, am a member of the LoHAV group, and also of the Pokémon variety! I specifically did Blazing Skies, featuring Geo, the Charizard! I find your usage of Greninja to be a unique choice, of which I heavily appreciate! Greninja was my brother's starter, and main in Sm4sh, and I haven't seen much representation of the guy lately. But seeing this makes me happy, knowing my brother's favorite is adored by other people, too.

Consider yourself liked and followed!

I'm part of the M.O.A.R group, or the Moar, Organization, At, Remakes

I like it; anyone know any other good Smash Bros Crossovers?

I really like that he's using pokemon moves and mentioning types

yay!!:yay: new chapter love this story!!:pinkiehappy:

Totally forgot about this story:facehoof:
Oh well, at least it's getting even more interesting

Not bad... not bad at all. I will look forward to more.

sadly, i have seen better Displaced stories so this one is going by the wayside for me..

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