Read The Sequel! You're Gonna Fly!
Sticks and stones may break bones. But bones heal. Hearts do not.
As wrists shatter and arms crumble, as legs bend and ribs fracture, as feet break and toes twist, as fingers snap and hands collapse, we all know things will get better in time.
But when someone carves a crack into the fragile rock that is our hearts, it never goes away.
Scootaoo enters her first day of school as blind as a bat, unsure, unknowing, and unaware of how the other fillies of the classroom may treat her. Just because she is who she is.
Story takes place BEFORE Scootaloo meets that CMC
Chapters (2)
This looks like a good start, though I won't be able to comment on my overall opinions until the second part comes out. However, I did catch a couple of things.
*wretched
*mane
As I mentioned before, I'll have more to say when the second part comes out. I'll be waiting on your update, O-Neb.
4320145 Thank you for calling that out. :) Dibs
4320203
No problem.
DT and SS..ugh.
Gly?
4335754 Thanks for calling that out, I can be dumb as shit sometimes :/
"Unwillingly, she took a seat in her desk by the back of the room and waited for class to begin. She looked on like a stranger as her fellow peers hysterically laughed at one another’s jokes, or commented on their favorite activities. She was an alien in this place, alone, only accompanied by the echoing laughs of others."
I know how you feel Scootaloo...
Aw . . . poor Scootalo!!!
Damn that's deep man that's just........dang it now I'm sad
ouch... that's low even for diamond and silver spoon
Hold on I need to find my banjo to hit dt and ss with
4461327 Me too.
No! Scootaloo! Grrrrrr..... Come here to DIE! It's what you deserve for that, you bullies!
