Rumble has always liked Scootaloo, but was afraid to tell her how he really feels. He has kept his secret to himself for years now.
Scootaloo has always liked Rumble, but was afraid to tell him how she really feels. She has kept this secret to herself for years now.
Will they ever confess their love for one another? It drives them mad thinking of the answer, but they are afraid. Afraid of their feelings. They need to get this weight off their chests. Can they do it?
***This story was a collaborative effort. Author, and friend of mine, Follow Focus helped me a lot with this and helped with proof reading. So a BIG thank you to Follow. Since Follow helped me so much, we decided to make it a collaborative story. Enjoy!***
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I will read this later. Maybe I'll get some ideas for my own Rumbaloo story.
The funny thing is that I started writing mine, and Rumbaloo became popular. No one cared about Rumble until then. Meh.
Anyways, as I said, I will read this later. If you want to check out mine as well, feel free. It's called Together We Fly.
~Hothead112
Cute. I like RumbleLoo. But I think that, considering all the build up, when he kissed her so suddenly, it just seemed way too soon. Like, it just doesn't seem like a plausible thing to happen. But it wasn't badly written or anything! I just would have liked the scene with them two to be drawn out a little more.
Also:
Not sure if that's a mistake in editing or something, but there's two spaces after "unguarded," and I think the word "on" the unguarded Party Canon is messing.
Still, +1 because foal crushes are super cute
Octavia plays CHAMBER music.
Brilliant i love this story
Ah, young love!
4399699 I'm not too sure what you mean. Explain please.
4399633 Oops, Hehe. Yeah. I thought I got that. I guess it didn't save when I made the correction. Thanks. I'll fix that now.
4399596 Sure, I'll give it a read when I can. Hope you enjoy!
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Thanks! And I hope I enjoy it, too.
I started reading this because it connected to my own life.
Ugh. I wish I could. I'm too inhibited.You don't want to hear about my personal life, do you?This was a cute story. I liked it.
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LOL it's OK, I don't mind. I have been in the same type of situation Scootaloo is going through. That's how I met my ex girlfriend. (We split just because we weren't ready for a relationship. Still good friends though.) The point is, I liked her and she liked me. I would have never known it if I didn't ask her out. And believe me when I tell you that I was terrified to hear the answer. LOL. You ever want to talk, by all means, ask. I don't mind helping others with both stories and real life issues. Now if you are totally uncomfortable with that, I can understand. (Sorry for the leachure) Glad you liked the story. :D
4419621 You're welcome
Yay! This is a cute little one-shot, with only one noticeable grammer mistake. Well, good job!
4414579 Explanation! :D
LOL, Pinkie called an orchestra for her party!
This story reminds me when I first saw Scootaloo in the series, back then I thought she was a colt! \
And then they
bangeddid nothing of note whatsoever.4454220 LOL. Made my day.
4441729 Oh, cool. Thanks. It would still be considered a certain type band though, right? I mean even a small group of people (ponies for this matter) who play instruments as a whole is known as a band. Or am I just dead wrong. LOL
4455506 I think you are correct
Great story! I have to admit, Rumble and Scootaloo look cute together.
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in the beginning I thought rainbow dash was a guy. I swear it's that tomboy flair.
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LOL Scoots is the same way too; but yeah, I see what you mean. XD
adorable story