A brony who's constantly traveling around
When Applejack spots Derpy staring off into space, she wants to know if the lonely mare is all right. It turns out that Derpy has a lot to think about, including quite a few other pegasi who venture to Sweet Apple Acres in the middle of the night to do the same.
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Wow, just... wow.
I didn't expect to fall in love with this fic until I started to get Derpy's point. I have been thinking just like her for the last three weeks and it is amazing how indeed we are small comparing the world or the universe. I could't stop smiling when the other pegasus started to talk and how everyone had their own big community of kindness, is something you don't see often nowadays. And you see, even the smallest details and actions can totally change someone's day or even life. You gathered up all of this in one single chapter and it made me feel so good.
Thanks for this contribution to the fandom, I hope I can see more of this in the future.
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Thanks for the feedback, comments like this make me glad I became a Brony.
Again, I'm thinking of how I can write the friendships being made with the rest of them- Derpy asking for magical help from Twi has already been done. In fact, Remedy wrote a great TwiDerp ship called Address Unknown in which she does just that. I naturally want to go off the beaten path to find other ways for everypony to connect.
This was a really lovely story; a few spellig errors here and there, but what story dosn't have one or two of those. Anyway, very good story, I especially liked the way yo portrayed Derpy/Ditzy as a deep, philosophical thinker, instead of how a lot of other writers write her.
There needs to be a 'SUPRAH FAVORITE' button.