Big Macintosh, Derpy, And A Loud Mouth

Back in Big Macintosh's school days he got into a fight over some jokes somepony made about the wrong filly.

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Derpsanddinks404

Derpsanddinks404 #1 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

Aww. 'Tis cute, my good sir or madam. I like it!

palelordhiphis

palelordhiphis #2 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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Thanks. :) Glad you like it. :)

WildStallion

WildStallion #3 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

How sweet

Platnium

Platnium #4 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

that was so cutei'm.. i think i'm crying

palelordhiphis

palelordhiphis #5 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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Glad you like it.

1899275

Awwwe! Thanks.

ObabScribbler

ObabScribbler #6 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · 1 · ·

I hope you don't mind, but I've put together a little dramatic reading of this fic on YouTube --> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KPukLofFE5g&feature=share&list=PLWpbmrHCXcIEruZbnDgb_PiLEDlvoMG4N

palelordhiphis

palelordhiphis #7 · Jan 3rd, 2013 · · ·

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I'm flattered, thank you. :) You got the name pretty close. In Pale Lord Hiphis the "ph" is "F".

MidnightBloom

MidnightBloom #8 · Jan 4th, 2013 · 1 · ·

sweet story!
BUT IM STILL A DERPY AND DOCTOR FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

palelordhiphis

palelordhiphis #9 · Jan 4th, 2013 · · ·

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Thanks. :) I like a few different Derpy pairings, including DerpyxDoctor and DerpyXBigMacintosh.

MidnightBloom

MidnightBloom #10 · Jan 5th, 2013 · 1 · ·

1901190 yay

JennaPurpleHeart

JennaPurpleHeart #11 · Jan 7th, 2013 · 1 · ·

oooh! you must make another! this was so cute!!!!

palelordhiphis

palelordhiphis #12 · Jan 8th, 2013 · · ·

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Thanks so much!

I was thinking of expanding this story. I've had a couple requests on the other places I've posted it.

ClickClackTheBrony

ClickClackTheBrony #13 · Jan 22nd, 2013 · 2 · ·

Cool story bro, definitely has potential to grow.

... I did not mean for that to rhyme.

palelordhiphis

palelordhiphis #14 · Jan 22nd, 2013 · · ·

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Thanks. :)

I'll let you in on a little secret. All my fanfiction happens in the same Universe. So, this one, "Discord At Death's Bed" and "Love Of Shadow And Night" all happen in the same overarching reality. They might even effect each other (most will, some less than others)

But I think I will extend this one-shot a bit at some point. :)

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