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The home town of Princess Mi Amore Cadenza is under siege. The royal family has been slaughtered, leaving only Cadence alive thanks to her being in Canterlot. The streets are swarming with soldiers, rounding up any survivors, and striking down any left-over soldiers or rebellious people.

Five rookies, almost fresh out of military school, are tasked with keeping an eye on the city until Princess Luna and her night guard arrive to take care of the siege.

But a lust for vengeance, and youthful impatience causes those plans to get washed down the drain. Shining Armor charges towards the gates, intent on avenging his love's family. The others follow, and are met with five of the officers of the enemy.

This is the story of Crystal's fight against one of them, and how she came to be known as "The Wendigo."

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This is a good idea! It's easily expandable, too. I like it!

Pretty nice, especially if you wrote it in 2 1/2 hour:raritywink:
There are just a few errors of editing here and there, but it's really nice like that:twilightsmile:

I moved it to the canon folder on Apple Scratch

I really like the idea of exploring more of the characters. And like Mariacheat said, there were a few mistakes but it was indeed a great story!

Niiiice!:pinkiehappy:

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Wow, canon folder! Congrats! Otherwise I thought it would have been your work on the Apple Scratch promt tag "before an Apple Scratch towards the world"!:trixieshiftright:

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Mariacheat and I talked a bit about it before I started writing it... and he suggested I wrote it as a part of canon.

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Still, it's a big honore having your story Being part of Canon, and it's a really nice story!

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Thanks :twilightsmile:
I'm glad some people enjoy it... since it received little to no attention upon upload xD

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well, Mariacheat-brony did a blog post about it not to long ago, wich was the way I found it!

very good story and yes a few misspelled words but meh did good by me

Alright I've been meaning to read this for a while. And I finally clicked on it to read.

Hmm I thought it was pretty good.:twilightsmile: I thought the winter magic was pretty cool.:raritystarry: Good one shot.

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Thanks, I'm glad you think so :twilightsmile:
If you hadn't realised yet, this is a short oneshot showing a piece of the past in the Apple Scratch series written by Mariacheat Brony. You should go read the originals if you haven't already :pinkiesmile:

4617208 Oh I already knew of the Apple Scratch Verse, and they're great stories. :twilightsmile:

I'm actually writing a Tales of Apple Scratch story myself.:twilightblush:

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