Fleur de Lis, Maud Pie, and Cream Pie have a little adventure in the City of Lights. But wait, they are being followed, and they don't know who.
I write my stories on my ten minute breaks at work, read them like a detective
Fleur de Lis, Maud Pie, and Cream Pie have a little adventure in the City of Lights. But wait, they are being followed, and they don't know who.
I'll follow this, but I have to say, Fleur's phonetic accent is kind of annoying to read, you may want to drop it (and her character strikes me as a bit too controlling of Fancy but that's more personal taste I think)
Cream Pie is an interesting name.
special thanks to monokeras for the spelling help, he knows his Paris better than me. and yes all the ze and zems are tiring but so is traveling. and i got the name Cream Pie from a friend on google+ who wanted a background story for her OC. the story doesn't really have a point to it, just some fun stuff in the city of lights. so now i think i need to do something more with it, but what? any suggestions?